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Poet, My Friend

What is friendship to me but a culmination Qualities with signs of kindness and compassion Earned respect for fair play heed no hesitation Backbone and humility in the equation Striving for lofty ideals and ambition Rising above the mundane orientation Hints of spirituality’s revelation With a penchant for beauty, art and creation For you, my friend, I have but words of ovation Your heart thunders proud flaunting determination Wielding words like harnessing intoxication Epitome of virtues’ crystallization AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on June 10, 2018 for contest QUALITIES YOU ADMIRE IN FRIENDS co-sponsored by CAROLYN DEVONSHIRE AND JACK HORNE - RANKED 7TH

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Date: 7/1/2018 2:03:00 AM
Wonderful, especially like the last line - virtues crystallisation - claps
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Date: 7/1/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Virginia.
Date: 6/29/2018 12:10:00 AM
This entry is wonderfully written Line. Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 6/29/2018 12:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/27/2018 7:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful description of qualities in your friends and your tribute too. You portray a lot of those qualities yourself. :)
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Date: 6/27/2018 7:31:00 PM
What a wonderful thing to say, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/27/2018 8:27:00 AM
Great piece of work. Congratulations on your win. Faux
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Date: 6/27/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thanks, Faux. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2018 4:21:00 PM
Congrats! Great poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/26/2018 9:27:00 PM
Thank you, Haley. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2018 2:35:00 PM
Many congrats -Line:-) hugs Jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/26/2018 2:49:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2018 2:34:00 PM
Line, every poet on Soup who reads your entry will say to themselves, "I wish it was me she is referring to." Congratulations on such a brilliant write and win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/26/2018 2:49:00 PM
And they would all be right. Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Curtis. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2018 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations Line. Tom.
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Date: 6/26/2018 1:51:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/26/2018 12:02:00 PM
Line, you surely provided some valuable insight into the qualities that make a person a good friend. "Backbone and humility" hadn't occurred to me, but they are important qualities in friends. Thank you for supporting the contest and congratulations on your win! Hugs, Carolyn
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/26/2018 1:53:00 PM
Much appreciated, Carolyn and Jack. Fun contest and very generous prizes!
Date: 6/10/2018 8:04:00 PM
Standing ovation for your outstanding write! Fellow poets of such genuine qualities but are indeed worthy of your words of pride, love and appreciation! The best of luck for your adept pen and poetic heart in the contest. Shine Line and stay blessed.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/10/2018 10:04:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Besma. You are such a delight.
Date: 6/10/2018 3:36:00 PM
A very thorough description of friendship line. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 6/10/2018 6:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom. Most appreciated.

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