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MY HOPE FOR THE FUTURE The sun will shine brighter tomorrow when we show goodwill towards our fellow men. Be more compassionate, show understanding, become more forgiving and less demanding We should look to the future and forget the past Life is so so precious and passes by way too fast If we unite together we could eradicate war and live in peace, we can all do this for sure! Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 6/11/18

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Date: 7/6/2018 9:39:00 AM
Hi Jan, I agree with the message in this well written write. Congrats on your high placement. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/6/2018 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2018 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jan! Glad to see this here. An awesome poem with great wisdom, inspiring. :)
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:06:00 AM
We can but hope Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2018 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan, a message that we all need to adhere, well written. :))
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:05:00 AM
Thanks Roy:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2018 5:29:00 AM
Beautifully written and well done Jan, congrats on your win in my contest and thanks for being part of this. God Bless...Charlie
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:05:00 AM
Thanks for the inspiration Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2018 5:15:00 AM
beautifully done, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:04:00 AM
Thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/3/2018 12:51:00 AM
Not sure how I missed this one Jan. Wow...it is a Poem of Poems! I love the content and the poet! : ) Congratulations on your 2nd much deserved placement my friend! xxoo
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:04:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I am so behind on soup spend less and less time as too busy with enjoying life and getting out and about on our little Island:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/2/2018 11:38:00 PM
Excellent. Jan , congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:03:00 AM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/2/2018 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations, Jan on your great win. Great message.
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:03:00 AM
Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/2/2018 10:43:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your podium prize for this inspirational write, Jan! Best always, Gershon
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:03:00 AM
Thanks GW:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/2/2018 10:29:00 PM
Jan, I'm not the least bit surprised to see the words of wisdom that flow from your pen. This is an absolute example of the kindness, compassion, and love that is in your heart. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:02:00 AM
Thanks Curtis:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/2/2018 9:44:00 PM
I don't pray often and when I do it's to whoever is prepared to listen, please let peace prevail, a great poem Jan, keep spreading the word, together we will have peace! Congratulations Jan, hugs Mick
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Date: 7/5/2018 1:56:00 AM
Thanks Mick:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/13/2018 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful Jan...sorry haven't been around in a bit...had to have surgery on my good knee yesterday. Hurt it 10 days ago...out of action for 3 months
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Date: 6/13/2018 3:34:00 PM
oh Tim, I'm so sorry it seems to be one thing after another with us both at the moment. Get well soon:-) hugs jan xxx
Date: 6/12/2018 8:18:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts...penned with love of humanity I'm sure. Great poem, Jan. Hope you don't mind if I share it in my groups, "Poetry of Peace" and "People for Peace" on Facebook.
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Date: 6/15/2018 11:21:00 AM
So sorry Carole, I had replied but it didn't send for some reason - please use the poem let's hope it will make a difference and one day we do get world peace:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/12/2018 5:04:00 PM
Lovely sentiment, Jan. Let's dream.
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Date: 6/13/2018 3:32:00 PM
We have little chance of peace with Ronald Dump and Dung hung lo in power but we can live in hope we have peace one day:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/12/2018 12:43:00 PM
I agree with Daniel: Inspiring write! However, I disagree with him about material profit: The blessings of peace are manifold.... The Prophets of peace / messianic times worried not about profit! :) gw
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Date: 6/13/2018 3:31:00 PM
Thanks so much Gershon:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/12/2018 11:22:00 AM
Inspiring write, Jan. There simply doesn't seem to be any material profit in peace.
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:27:00 PM
Unfortunately I think you are so right there Daniel:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/12/2018 6:09:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful message in your poem, Jan. Words of peace and unity elegantly delivered.
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:27:00 PM
Thanks Vijay:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/12/2018 12:44:00 AM
Sure ingredients for true peace will never pass. Such a poem is indeed first class in our hope for the task. Best Luck in Contest. Peace, Love and Joy.
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:25:00 PM
Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2018 11:11:00 PM
Jan, beautifully written poem that could be fashioned as an international prayer.. you have such a gift!
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:24:00 PM
You are too kind Chance:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2018 10:54:00 PM
Love your poem, Jan. A tall order but one can dream.
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:24:00 PM
I beleive we have no hope if we can't dream Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2018 10:51:00 PM
Wonderful sentiment fabulously penned Jan! Splendid entry for this contest. Peace dear! And good luck in the contest :) xomo!
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Date: 6/12/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2018 8:43:00 PM
Peace begins with sharing a different point of view, but with Trump as our leader, not much chance of that happening in Singapore, nor anywhere else despite your well presented advocacy! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/12/2018 4:45:00 PM
Got to agree with you about our world leaders Rico - who knows what time will bring and we can live in hope:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2018 6:08:00 PM
Very nice, uniting together. Well written Jan :)
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Date: 6/11/2018 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/11/2018 5:56:00 PM
Great vision Jan and I'm sure many would share your views, we all want to live in peace and harmony, we can only hope. Tom PS, have emailed you.
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Date: 6/11/2018 5:58:00 PM
Thanks Tom, the mail must be in the ether its not arrived yet:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/11/2018 4:28:00 PM
We can, in each other we must trust, a beautiful profound piece Jan, the sentiments of many I am sure! HUGS Mick
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Date: 6/11/2018 4:30:00 PM
We can only do our best Mick, peace in the world would be wonderful - would be awesome to see it in our lifetime:-)Not my usual style of poem but I was inspired by the contest and hope Charles likes my thoughts:-) hugs jan xx

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