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Poem For Certain Critics - They Know Who They Are, I Think

Ears listening to only their lies, And their lies speaking only to them, Trying to be quiet yet still screaming, Drowning in rants never heard, So concise but not too clear, Imprisoned in thoughts of obsession, Muttering useless ancient literary rules, In love with yet hating poetic expressions, Foreign to their limited constrained imaginations, Trapped behind walls of old thought, Grasping yet never holding reality, While visions of punctuation and conformity crowd their tiny unexpanded minds, Judging without thinking one step ahead, Thinking thoughts that kill their judgement, Still their bodies move forward to nowhere, Their voices the only sound left to comfort them, Unaware of love just beneath their windows, Desolation blinds their desperate micro-management brains, In pathetic awe of ancient written rules, Never really meant for ones of their ilk, For they were penned for poets of consciousness, Aware their times and rules would surely end, Were never truly meant for all the centuries, Suffocating in the dust of a past they never lived, Afraid of new ideas of written expression, Created from the minds of what they fear most, Free thinking writers unafraid of literary change, And still, They talk and talk and talk, saying absolutely nothing. Copyright © 2014 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved "A poem to me is the essence of any thought, Being built from its foundation into tower scraping sky. It can fly like no other bird to places never seen, Even spaceships can only dream of taking its place." © 2014 Robert William Gruhn

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Date: 8/27/2014 5:15:00 AM
You and your best poem have many supporters who with your ideas and thoughts are courters. Bateman is one of them who like you is also a great poet. Check out my latest poem which I am currently writing which to many may be appealing as well as inviting. Jim Horn
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Date: 7/26/2014 10:09:00 AM
When the rules overshadow the message, the beauty of the write poetry suffers IMHO. The Pharisees come to mind for me. Beauty , even great beauty never reaches perfection. The question becomes what is more important the technique or the poetic spirit and message in the write. Perfect technique be damn in my opinion when it is used to destroy the spirit and love a poet has or generously offers!!!
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Date: 7/16/2014 2:02:00 PM
Ditto, ditto, ditto. WOW this is a phenomenal write, Robert. Wish I had written this deep, powerful piece myself! BRAVO!
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Robert Gruhn
Date: 7/16/2014 10:06:00 PM
Thank you so much dear friend and lovely poetess Pandita! Best, Robert
Date: 7/16/2014 7:40:00 AM
Hear Hear Robert I know people can be put off from entering contests because of strict rules which can actually detract from the enjoyment of writing. I enter contests to stretch my ability as a writer and have FUN which is oh so lacking from the site:-) I hope this poem will get a lot of comments - they too are lacking! Hugs Jan xxx
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Robert Gruhn
Date: 7/16/2014 10:11:00 PM
Thank you poetess Jan, strict rules in writing are for the mentally imprisoned! That has always been my personal take. Best, Robert
Date: 7/15/2014 9:35:00 PM
Well said Robert :) very well said.
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