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Plopping On One-Eyed Frass

is there such a thing as one-eyed fr.ass?! Huh. Maybe, maybe not ha. Do (doo? does?) frass even have eyes. I think not! Sure looks pretty though... if I were given the chance to choose what my poop looks like, I'd choose frass!

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Joe Maverick

Date: 5/20/2012 2:14:00 PM

Good to read this earth sweet sonnet you have penned Nikko

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2012 8:47:00 PM

Belated congrats to you if I never said so before, Nikko and thanks for my win in your earth contest. Can't wait till your connection gets better and we can have our lovely email chats again. Luv, Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/5/2012 11:27:00 AM

Dear Nikko, This is really lovely and uplifting. It inspires me to want to stop my busy day and write again. I too have been having computer problems and my computer keeps freezing and I have to manually turn it off. Wish I knew more about computers. I spent my birthday doing reiki at the hospital on patients and then my daughter and husband brought their baby over to my delight. Caring for her while my daughter works is the joy of my life. Thank you for the B.day greetings. It was so sweet and thoughtful of Andie to mention my b.day in her blog. Love, Lotus

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2012 5:17:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in the "Sonneteers" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/3/2012 4:58:00 AM

Hey,..are u being "crabby" again...I love the idea of a purple nurple crab! You will have to write a silly ditty about this cutie patootie avatar of yours. I wanted to drop by and say howdy...I will be getting my garden out this week and not on here as much...please tell your dear mum hello for me..let me know how things are going with her. Love, Gwendolen

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/30/2012 9:21:00 PM

Hi Nikko, love the way you use nature to tell a story with a deeper meaning. I think I hear what you have said. Luv. Elizabeth

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2012 8:31:00 PM

HI on this one again. Was it in the sonnet contest? It may not have perfect meter, but gosh darn, it's very creative!! thanks for your two comments. I was just looking at my cell phone and it occurred to me. oh my gosh, I could have used this for the froggy/lily pad contest, but I already had my fable up. Do you think I was better off to enter the fable, Nikko? hope to see you soon in emails. Luv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/30/2012 3:38:00 AM

same here, nikks... bad tech problems for a months now.. DSL ka ba?.. it's my IE, i think!.. but i gotta give you brownies for this beauty, senti.. lovely!.. congrats with hugggs

Dalila Agtani

Date: 4/30/2012 1:48:00 AM

Hello my dear Nikko I had pretty bad experience of internet connections when I went home. It is doubly frustrating to get connected in the barrios. May your wishes come true in every coin you threw! Good luck in your entry. All my love Dalila

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2012 12:57:00 PM

What a lovely poem on the beauty of nature, Nikko. I love the "kaleidoscopic waterfalls and the thought of lying softly on the grass in Earth's embrace. Beautiful! My fishing trip wasn't as good as last year's, but I do have plenty of fish. Wish I had your regular email address. Would like to stay in touch. Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

Date: 4/29/2012 4:40:00 AM

This is just dreamy dear poet ! Oh yes, I really enjoyed this write ! Have a blessed new week Nikko ! Much love, james

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/29/2012 2:55:00 AM

Your connection is acting stale?...How is it that the WWW is never faithful to you gals in the Philippines? I don't get it!...I like how you described the dew in this sonnet...it reminds me of the many attributes of manna...wonderful imagination with cages of glass and each dewdrop having its own story...u got some kind of imagination, NIKKO. Things are going well with the family...I slowed myself down on purpose...catching up on a decade of needed rest!....u got some amazing entries in your earth hour contest...I saw a fab one today! Hugs to u 2.

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/28/2012 12:57:00 PM

Superb write Nikko!!! I really enjoyed this gem,congratulations xoxoxo

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 4/27/2012 9:57:00 PM

Hi there Nikko! Loved what you were alluding to here, the metaphor that permeated this entire sonnet. Such a neat way to approach this contest. Now, I LOVED lines 4 and 5. The metaphors really spoke to us, I enjoyed reading this. Cheers and congrats, Cyndi

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/27/2012 8:44:00 AM

Congratulations Nikko!! I love this...Well Done my friend...big hugs,love~deb

David Williams

Date: 4/27/2012 8:12:00 AM

Nikko congrats on your win, just fab..David

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 4/26/2012 1:30:00 PM

Good to have you back Nikko, hope it will last forever! Wonderful sonnet this one, really liked this too! Best of luck in the contest! oxox love always Laila

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2012 5:00:00 PM

Nikko, this has such awesome description and creativity shown through it. I sure miss you, sweetie and I hope that your connection gets better. Do you know why it's so bad? luv ya, Andrea

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/25/2012 2:08:00 PM

And this is why I miss your poetry...it always sings so beautifully!! Glad you see you here!! Hugs, Nikko!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2012 12:36:00 PM

Nikko, I am falling with you - love it....well done! - oxox Anne-Lise - - Big hug.

David Williams

Date: 4/25/2012 12:23:00 PM

Nikko nice italian sonnet, funny thing is I was going to do one of those today but stuck with the English version, might try one tommo, nice to see you around..David

Kash Poet

Date: 4/25/2012 12:21:00 PM

Very good Sonnet from you Nikko.Best wishes for the contest.