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A Lover's Masterpiece

She laid in morn’s dew light resting her head on his chest- for love can never be b r o k e n if given a second chance. The days grew longer and romance grew stronger and the reasons for making sweet memories proved to be a reason for breathing. Within a deep breath's moment he gazed at nothing except her eyes- they were deep chestnut holding such w i s d o m, yet grace- he knew there'd never be another, another lover... for him. He knew she was the one; she knew he was the one... and in an instant they e n t w i n e d into marital bliss. Like dew drops on a rose, she completed him, like pebbles on a shore he surfaced her- like sand in an hourglass they s l o w l y took their time with ease to show intense LOVE IN THE MAKING. He sparked her fire- she ignited his lust. She needed him in her youth, and the more they aged the more they fed each other's desires. For life is but a charcoal etching- ebony and white mixed with shadows of grey e x p a n d i n g into deep artisan memories… he engraved her soft glowing silhouette on parchment leaving an impression of passion. The outline of her raven figure released his affection framing her within a... lover’s m a s t e r p i e c e. Your Best Poem in the Last Year Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One June 1, 2017

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Date: 2/9/2018 4:40:00 PM
Rich passionate imagery in your sensual and romantic Laura. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/8/2018 11:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/5/2018 9:32:00 PM
Congrats on your lovely winning poem, Laura.
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Date: 2/5/2018 5:36:00 PM
A readme again read, congratulations on your joint 1t place Luara... Mick
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Date: 2/5/2018 4:28:00 PM
Full of lovely lines Lulloo.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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Date: 12/9/2017 3:54:00 PM
So lovely and sensual, Laura. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/8/2017 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations Laura! xomo :)
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Date: 12/7/2017 11:50:00 PM
A gorgeous and sensual write, Laura, (as I discovered back in July), woven with a tapestry of sublime imagery and phrasing! LOVED it - congratulations on SIXTH PLACE and thank you for your patience! :-)
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Date: 7/29/2017 5:20:00 PM
Wonderfully penned and exquisitely romantic poem, Laura ... just adore this! Congratulations on your well-earned placement, My Friend - blessings! :-)
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Date: 7/28/2017 4:45:00 AM
I really love the way you've spaced the key words as an emphasis to your message delivery. The imagery is also rich! Congrats Laura, for your well-deserved third placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 7/27/2017 10:49:00 PM
This is a real beauty luloo! Congratulations on your third placement!
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Date: 7/27/2017 9:55:00 AM
Simply Sublime! Congratulations! A fav for sure.
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Date: 7/27/2017 9:14:00 AM
I never read this one before but it has your signature style written all over it Laura, congrats on a fine win!
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