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Come Play

Don’t waste the day come what may Go out to play beneath a ray Keep thoughts of gray far at bay AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on September 4, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/5/2019 10:51:00 PM

Do not stay, get out there, be gay and play, and I mean today! Monorhymes are tough. Nice one, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/6/2019 8:51:00 AM

Absolutely, Caren.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/5/2019 9:59:00 PM

For this poem I say HOORAY!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/6/2019 8:51:00 AM

Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/5/2019 10:26:00 AM

darn, those thoughts of gray can ruin your day... great poem lovely Line :)-luloo

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/5/2019 11:59:00 AM

Thanks, Lu Loo, for your lovely visit and comment.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/5/2019 9:37:00 AM

love the advice, i try and make the most of everyday...beautifully penned :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/5/2019 12:00:00 PM

That's the way to do it, Sandra. Thanks for your visit.

Chris Green

Date: 9/5/2019 7:27:00 AM

This is how every day should be. :) Nicely done.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/5/2019 8:43:00 AM

Thanks, Chris. Much appreciated.