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Along the pilgrimage path life purged and plundered   minds wept and wondered   weeds steadfastly grew   knowing not what we now knew   weary travelers groaned and grumbled   stepping cross wayward stones, tumbled   some had stumbled or even fell   seeking separate stories to tell     ink driven, dried up, cursed, then forgiven   bent in half, twisted, some curved   tales told, valient bold and self served   where whispers turned and ran   down along side stolen scripts   falling elegantly off loose lips   masses cheered the absurd   romantic scenes poetically heard     death defied and defiled   joyous celebration in a time   infectious an emancipation   liberated through rhyme lest relief    "To weep is to make less the depth of grief."

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Date: 6/20/2018 8:45:00 AM
A belated congrats for POTD. I’m glad I dropped by.
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Date: 6/15/2018 8:22:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, I'm obviously behind on reading others. Ditto to Lin's comment this is a special write Tim, I enjoy your longer writes even more!
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Date: 6/15/2018 1:07:00 AM
Hi Tim, hope you don't mind me stopping by with belated congratulations on p.o.t.d. award, and even more on a cleverly written poem which treats an oft tackled theme with such poetic elegance. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/3/2018 5:54:00 PM
Hello Tim, I have enjoyed your poem. I could see the scenes as I was reading. ||Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 6/1/2018 1:47:00 PM
It was a joy to read this well deserved POTD Tim! Congratulations on the honor! : )
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Date: 5/28/2018 4:30:00 AM
Hello Tim, Congratulations on POTD!! Methinks thou hast rhymed and chimed so very well with this masterful free verse. Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 5/26/2018 2:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! Well done and great message.
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Date: 5/25/2018 3:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem of the day I am a big fan of poetry that rhymes Tim and I have to say this poem is so well laid out with such witty imaginary storyline That is fun through every line super good write on this poem I enjoyed it very much. Have a wonderful day JACK2
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Date: 5/24/2018 11:16:00 PM
Back to say congrats!!! If ever a poem deserved POTD, this is the one!
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Date: 5/24/2018 9:59:00 PM
Tim, love the theme and rhyme... congratulations on poem of the day Hugs
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Date: 5/24/2018 11:08:00 AM
Great Poem Tim. Well done on the POTD Les
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Date: 5/25/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Les
Date: 5/24/2018 10:37:00 AM
Awesome alliteration! Congrats.
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/25/2018 9:17:00 AM
Ha, you know I love that device... thanks Dale
Date: 5/24/2018 9:21:00 AM
Tim, Congrats on POTD! Well done!
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/25/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thank you Warren
Date: 5/24/2018 9:04:00 AM
Tim, wonderful writing and congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/25/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thank you my friend
Date: 5/24/2018 7:54:00 AM
Such an excellent write, Tim, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/25/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thanks Mike
Date: 5/24/2018 7:45:00 AM
Hi Tim, What a deep and written piece. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved;-) Alexis
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Date: 5/25/2018 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Alexis :)
Date: 5/24/2018 7:41:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Tim
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Date: 5/24/2018 11:09:00 AM
Thanks Joseph
Date: 5/24/2018 7:30:00 AM
- Tim - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/24/2018 11:09:00 AM
Thank you A-L
Date: 5/24/2018 7:17:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Tim. Love the poem.
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Date: 5/24/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Agnes : ))
Date: 5/24/2018 6:51:00 AM
Your ability to weave free verse so cleverly with rhyme makes this write of yours exceptional. Touches of alliteration enhances it even more, but it's the messages you deliver that are astounding, Tim! I particularly like the 3rd stanza and its, "masses cheered the absurd..." and I smiled with where that led me. Inserting Shakespeare's line was the coup de grace to a plagiarizer, but the cherry atop a sundae! I hope to see this one climb.
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/24/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Lin
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2018 10:30:00 AM
:-) so perfectly said Lin:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/24/2018 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on potd Tim! :) xomo!
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/24/2018 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Mo, a big surprise
Date: 5/24/2018 5:24:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend on your POTD!...well said and crafted Timmy...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 5/24/2018 10:58:00 AM
Thank you WW
Date: 5/24/2018 2:43:00 AM
many many congrats on POTD Tim, the deeper I delve into your lines the more I love this write:-) adding to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I'm surprised with POTD
Date: 5/24/2018 12:34:00 AM
Tim, this such a well written poem, it just reminded me of older times, and I found verse just rolls of the tongue, beautiful lines.
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Date: 5/24/2018 10:05:00 AM
Thank you my friend
Date: 5/23/2018 7:31:00 PM
A nice write indeed...good rhythm and flow...All the best Tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/24/2018 10:05:00 AM
Thank you Arturo
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