Pink Joy

_______________________ The pain preceding a simple joy receiving my little pink love, you arrived in a downpour of glorious emotion.......... _______________________ Contest ~ "Pink Joy"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2012 9:55:00 AM

SHort but so sweet. Congrats on this win, Rick. It was a long time coming. Hey, btw. Where are you? I miss you here!!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/16/2012 11:46:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your win in the contest.Nice write.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2012 9:07:00 AM

congrats Rick on a super win for sweet words for babe luv.. hope u will return soon...missing u...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2012 5:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Royal's "Pink Joy" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2012 2:12:00 AM

Excellent! Congratulations on your superb 3rd place win!

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/15/2012 8:12:00 PM

^Rick, I absolutely love short works and this one is outstanding. I really enjoyed it. Congrats on winning 3rd place in Royal's contest.......S.Ronthorpe

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2011 12:31:00 AM

Good luck Rick,,, what a joy... p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2011 3:59:00 PM

A delightful description of how it feels to see a new life enter this world, Rick. Wishing you success in Royal's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/19/2011 1:41:00 PM

Lovely emotions you have worded well on the arrival of the pink joy, Rick, good luck

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/19/2011 12:02:00 PM

a downpour of poetic gems flowing, rick... lots of winning streajs! :) huggs, nette

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/19/2011 12:01:00 PM

Hey Rick- See, pink is a sexy color!! I once bought my spouse a pink shirt and it brings me joy each time he wears it! Good job on this tanka!!! Gwendolen