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a bridge to nowhere
over streams of consciousness -
betwixt God and time

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For the Picture Perfect 
  Haiku #1 contest


      May 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/16/2015 10:51:00 AM
Love the word "betwixt". It has a mystical, magical sound to it. Congrats on your win, Keith! Love, Kim
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 6/16/2015 6:02:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Kim. I love the word betwixt too even if it is hardly used anymore. God bless!
Date: 6/15/2015 8:40:00 PM
nice win, Luv ~LINDA~
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 6/16/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 6/14/2015 11:24:00 AM
a lot deeper than a puddle, my friend!! Congrats.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 6/14/2015 7:45:00 PM
Okay, maybe a millpond. Thanks for reading Andrea.
Date: 6/14/2015 5:15:00 AM
beautiful Keith congrats on placing hugs solid 7
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 6/14/2015 7:41:00 PM
Thanks again Shadow. Glad you liked it.
Date: 6/13/2015 9:01:00 PM
Keith. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 6/14/2015 7:40:00 PM
Appreciate it Skat as always!
Date: 5/26/2015 4:10:00 PM
Transcendental one. Is that the right word for it? Awesome!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 5/26/2015 6:03:00 PM
Hi Andrea. Yes, it's all very Zen but, if the truth be told, some might say I'm about as deep as a puddle!
Date: 5/26/2015 1:10:00 PM
Keith, a very fine Haiku. Best wishes.
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 5/26/2015 6:04:00 PM
Cheers Michael. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 5/25/2015 3:44:00 PM
Excellent!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 5/25/2015 10:41:00 PM
Much appreciated Judy.
Date: 5/25/2015 12:49:00 AM
Dynamic thought that's beautifully depicted in your write, Keith!
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 5/25/2015 10:40:00 PM
Cheers LM.
Date: 5/24/2015 11:29:00 PM
Very nice imagery in this lovely hiaku, Keith! Good luck on the contest :)
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Keith Trestrail
Date: 5/25/2015 10:40:00 PM
Thanks Laura, but I've gone and done what most neurotic poets do and re-written it!