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Perfect Day

I started of my day with your smile Wrapped my arms around your waist Pulled you to me Heard you giggle in my ear Felt your breath on my neck The start of another perfect day Dedicated to my sweetie who has gifted me with many perfect days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/10/2013 8:48:00 AM
Simple and sweet reflecting life's perfect moments
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/10/2013 9:48:00 AM
Thanks Monterey.
Date: 10/4/2013 5:12:00 PM
Happy you, happy she; on my way to practice this old simple technique I am not used to; I'm rather on the"don't forget your umbrella"technique....Keeps him perfectly dry...Well penned, my poet friend. Hugs!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/10/2013 9:47:00 AM
Ha ha, you make me smile!
Date: 10/3/2013 8:33:00 AM
Felt so much after reading this..ur creative again Richard :) I am a bit lost these days. ..missed reading ur amazing poems..*Hugs*
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/3/2013 9:23:00 AM
Hi Red, sorry to hear you are feeling lost. Hugs back.
Date: 10/1/2013 12:48:00 AM
this is adorable. Would not mind my own sweetie writing something like that to me!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/3/2013 9:24:00 AM
Read my Roses Multiplied poem, perhaps that will suffice.
Date: 9/30/2013 7:56:00 AM
I do the same thing with all my video games before I leave to work. It's Nerd Love. ;-) Beautifully written, sir!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2013 8:13:00 AM
Ha ha Drake! You brightened my day with your comment.
Date: 9/30/2013 4:18:00 AM
- Hope all your days will be like this ..... lovely poem Richard ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2013 7:03:00 AM
Me as well! Thanks.
Date: 9/29/2013 11:45:00 PM
best way to start any day...perfectly penned poem for your love :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2013 7:00:00 AM
Thanks Sandra
Date: 9/29/2013 9:41:00 PM
Sweet...Perfection is illusive...You have captured its essence...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/30/2013 6:58:00 AM
Thanks Eileen

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