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Peace, Joy, Contentment

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Bright stars that shone behind the clouds Magical fireworks lit the sky New hopes and dreams danced round unshroud While uncertainty tore the heart Leaving stains 'pon the blue lined sheet New Year can be an awesome start Peace, joy, contentment slipped right through An assurance no matter what Everything good will soon breakthrough New Year ride the light of sparklers Dance round uncensored and uncut Break off borders, release blinders Bright stars that shone behind the clouds Peace, joy, contentment slipped right through Written: January 02, 2016 Sponsor: Craig Cornish Contest: Cornish Sonnet Theme: New Year~~~Think outside the box!!! 8 syllables per line( If I can count to 8)

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/25/2016 1:32:00 AM

Sara, I liked this Sonnet of yours a lot. Nicely done

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/22/2016 11:55:00 PM

SARA, CONGRATS ON YOUR HM... LINDA :)

Len Gasun

Date: 1/16/2016 1:58:00 AM

A spectacular cornish sonnet my dear friend, Sara! I love it so much and you did it very well too. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Paul Callus

Date: 1/13/2016 11:47:00 AM

You usher in the new year with joy and peace, Sara. May you have a lovely and blessed year ahead! ~ Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2016 11:33:00 PM

Sara, nice to see your HM... Hugs ** SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/12/2016 1:39:00 AM

Joyful read Sara.. loved the serene title as well.. congrats on big win!

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/12/2016 12:02:00 AM

Fizzes with hope and joy, Sara, well done! Viv x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/8/2016 3:36:00 AM

Sara, blessings to you and your family.. =`) full of optimism and wonder!! Sara thank you for the e-card you sent to James which he shared tom me last time.. =`) smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

Louis Spence

Date: 1/6/2016 3:45:00 PM

Sara. Thank you for your kind assessment on my poem Players. I looked through your work and particularly like this bright offering. Well done. Louis

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/5/2016 6:55:00 PM

Full of positivity , a true beautiful and unique sonnet my dear , best of luck in the contest...hugs / / :) dalia

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/4/2016 3:01:00 PM

now, this endearing piece makes me happy, dear sara... i like!.. huggs and happy new year!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2016 5:58:00 PM

love the mention of the fireworks as symbols of the joy and contentment, Sara. Good luck in the cornish sonnet contest. and thanks for all your support of my poems this past year.

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 1/3/2016 5:52:00 PM

Marvelous title with lines promising good things for the new year and beyond. Thanks for visiting...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/13/2016 6:57:00 AM

I am so glad that I chose that as my title..I do hope that this year holds good things for everyone..Sara

White Sage

Date: 1/2/2016 8:55:00 PM

You wrote it right Sara, nice poem

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/3/2016 8:32:00 AM

Ahh!!! Thank you..Sara