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Patient 102 - Connecting

Misty eyed and smiling But she sees me not. I smile back and coax her; Still she sees me not. Guide her to the window Seems she sees me not, Try to find what’s hidden, Lo, she sees me not. I know there’s a reason That she sees me not, Attempt to find a trigger No, she sees me not. But, somehow, she’s changing Though she sees me not, Next time we might break through As she sees me not, And maybe someday I will know Why she sees me not.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/27/2009 7:42:00 AM
If this is your vocation ... it would account for your remarkable way of going into a character and coming out with the details like light . Let me encourage in whatever place you are called. Bravo.
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