Patience

I become restless along barbed vines of woodland, etched by longer hours yet, thoughts drift into night’s chimes… till sunrise greets me, softly. Silent One's Contest Syllables of Wisdom #3 ~ 5/7/5/7/7 count 1/19/2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/29/2016 8:42:00 PM

NETTE, Congratulations on your "Syllables of Wisdom 3 WIN." Hugs. LINDA -

James Inman

Date: 1/24/2016 8:54:00 AM

Beautifully written, Nette.

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/24/2016 6:10:00 AM

Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2016 7:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Nette. Best one for imagery.

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 12:34:00 PM

NETTE, congratulations on your Syllables of Wisdom 3 win. *SKAT*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/21/2016 4:40:00 AM

Congrats on ur very wise winning write nette! Great tanka!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2016 9:22:00 PM

this is wonderful, Nette. If it were my contest, it would rate high.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/20/2016 12:16:00 AM

Very very enchanting Nette!

Lu Loo

Date: 1/18/2016 8:04:00 PM

Oh Nette...a lovely poem and good luck, it will do well in the contest :) *smiles* -luloo

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/18/2016 3:41:00 PM

If only sunrise were always soft. Lovely poem ... CayCay

Rhoma Em

Date: 1/18/2016 1:50:00 PM

This hit me as I always hurry, hurry. Brilliantly delivered, thanks to night's chimes!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2016 1:31:00 PM

- If you are patient and wait long enough .... it's always some gain - A great poem Nette - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carly Lalion

Date: 1/18/2016 1:13:00 PM

Fantastic poem! I know the feeling of wanting to get some things by demand. But we need to wait; patience is a virtue. Thank you for being a mentor!