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Passion "runaway Train"

Boarding a train__North Just to spend summer Where the air is cool Humidity low Away from the South Where life had become A "runaway train" In some people's eyes Meeting him in March Our love serious Now this day in May Love's train is derailed Adults want _stopped The "runaway train" That is our young life Adults want control Train was not stopped Passion won but love Was derailed_the train Free but off tracks_stopped Shell of cars just hulls All that's left of train Wasted just sitting By the side of track

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/20/2010 2:33:00 PM
I don't see your brown to the superbowl poem??!! go on and try it!!
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Date: 5/19/2010 3:38:00 PM
the love between two, always seem to be forgotten, the thoughts of it never leave my mind.i think of it all the time.. -Always
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Date: 5/19/2010 3:18:00 AM
good morning Sara, a very excellent write,..p.d.
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:11:00 PM
enjoyed--
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:29:00 PM
It's sad when the "shell of cars" is all that's left of the love train, Sara. Interesting use of the underscores. Best wishes for success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2010 7:46:00 AM
Darn..your love that didnt make it...but your poem is just great. BG
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:20:00 AM
Very unique theme to write on the runaway train. Thanks for your comments my poem A cyber-shepherd to his beloved. Good luck in the contest
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