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Passion, Love, Heartache and Hatred

Why is it you want to write of passion heartache and pain? You want to find out how it changed to hatred that’s insane. Love is something that cannot be taken likely or played with It’s not the same kind of love you experienced from birth But this lustful drive that causes whirlwinds of emotions, And the betrayal of yourself by tongue confessing devotions. One says things they don’t mean in order to get what they want Passion driven by falsifying one’s intentions, so to speak, a front. Exchanging hearts as tokens of committed unfailing love One real, one stone, proclaimed from the roof tops above This is how they come together and their love stamped with a seal But the imbalance of true commitment and love will reveal When both hearts are broken one real, one stone, one bleeds one won’t Heartache infused with pain comes hatred, a revenge full antidote. How can one measure hatred originated from love By the death of the cause which they are not worthy of….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/15/2010 3:41:00 AM
HELLO, I HAD GONE TRHU MY POEM, MY LATEST,POEM!( had your comment on it ) BY ANY CHANCE DID YOU DELETE A COMMENT TO MY POEM. JUST ASKING. IF YOU DID PLEASE EXPLAIN WHY? BY THE WAY I LoVE THE DEEP ESSENCE OF YOUR POEM*luv~SKAT
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Date: 8/29/2010 4:33:00 PM
lots of thoughts Sidney, your right, love is not to be toyed with, deep thoughts to your write, enjoyed..P.D.
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:24:00 AM
Hi Sidney, enjoyed this write of yours today.
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Date: 8/22/2010 8:59:00 PM
Wow..Sidney hope u entered this one in Farah's contest.. awesome write and terrific layout of your thoughts ...enjoyed.. tonight..ciao..but its morning for me..luv.. ciao..
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Date: 8/22/2010 8:38:00 PM
Emotional rollercoasters, what would life be without them? So many truths in this write I found myself shaking my head up and down in affirmation while reading.. Great write :)
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Date: 8/22/2010 8:38:00 PM
I agree with Carolyn, Can't be worth the heartache, in the present day relationships pattern, Sidney
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:26:00 PM
Gee, Sidney, we were on the same page tonight. Your poem has many of the same emotions as the one I just posted. Relationships are so confusing that I'm about to give up on them. Can't be worth the heartache. Genuinely moving poem. Love, Carolyn
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