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Partenza Represa Poetry - Shadows

SHADOWS ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Who follows who, your shadow you? Your shadow you? Weather says true! Weather says true, you have no clue? You have no clue who follows who. The sun moves your shadow for real! For real when the clouds will, yes, steal! Yes, steal, right or wrong, you'll feel strong. Feel strong, there's nothing you do wrong. Your shadow gives you much respite. You much respite, you thought it might? You thought it might make you feel well. Make you feel well, you just can't tell? Try sitting next, in a shadow. Shadow you will find you can now! You can now shadows understand. Understand, now live life as planned. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Date: 3/15/2018 6:16:00 PM
I love the rhythm and rhyme of this one. It's very whimsical and yet it has a message to it!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/15/2018 9:21:00 PM
Whimsical, I nearly got lost in it lol, thanks Andrea... Mick
Date: 3/15/2018 10:36:00 AM
They will enter your contest, PS is a bit quiet at the moment.. I do not enter contests, just create them...
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/15/2018 9:19:00 PM
Noo I just hought I'd let you know I have put one up ;-)
Date: 3/15/2018 7:33:00 AM
This is clever poetry, and you are write.. I like what you express here...
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/15/2018 8:31:00 AM
And as Lawrence Eberhart says, "Very versatile", going do an another. Thanks for your continued interest... Mick PS This might interest you too https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/contests/violette_poetry_contest_11198 :-) Sadly no takers yet :-(

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