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Participating in everyday life Actively avoiding drama and strife Recreation whether spontaneous or planned Attempting to heal both spirit and mind Daily becoming the one whom I'm meant to be I ncluding listening, praying and charity Silently minding my own business Ending daily with gratitude and forgiveness Written 12/22/2015 6th Place Paradise-Acrostic Contest by John Hamilton

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Date: 1/25/2018 10:14:00 PM
"listening, praying, and charity.......with gratitude and forgiveness" I totally agree.
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Date: 1/13/2016 11:33:00 AM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Susan Gentry
Date: 1/13/2016 7:44:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 12/28/2015 10:20:00 PM
Susan, a very nice win. SKAT
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 6:24:00 AM
Thank you SKAT!
Date: 12/28/2015 4:22:00 AM
Susan, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 6:24:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 12/28/2015 2:07:00 AM
Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic Susan.. congrats on big win!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 6:23:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Appreciate you took time to read and let me know what you thought... I like what you thought!!! Thanks again :)
Date: 12/27/2015 7:50:00 PM
Wonderful, simple and very true words of achieving paradise in everyday life, Susan. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 6:21:00 AM
Why thanks Sandra. Take care
Date: 12/27/2015 6:28:00 PM
Great expressions of harmony and sweet serenity in your paradise my friend! A7 Congrats on you win!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 6:19:00 AM
Oh my thank you! Very kind. I appreciate your stopping by and your opinions also. And the 7!!!
Date: 12/27/2015 3:17:00 PM
a lot of this is my personal paradise as well! Congrats on your fine win, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 6:17:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Hagd.
Date: 12/27/2015 11:09:00 AM
Susan congratulations on your win!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/27/2015 11:22:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 12/27/2015 3:37:00 AM
I am pleased to see this one on the winners' list, Susan. Glad to be re-reading it....and congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/27/2015 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Paul. Congrats to you also! Hope you are enjoying the Christmas and New Year holidays. Be safe...
Date: 12/27/2015 12:22:00 AM
Nice acrostic Susan, congrats on your placement!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/27/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thank you! Honored to be there!
Date: 12/24/2015 12:28:00 PM
Hi, Susan. The beautiful poem reveals your gentle soul and your humble and forgiving heart teaches us words of wisdom. Best Wishes in the contest. Thank you for your comment today. Merry Christmas to you and your loved ones. Peace & Love Andrew.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/24/2015 4:16:00 PM
Why thank you, Chris. I appreciate your kind words. Merry Christmas to you also and yours. Take care.
Date: 12/23/2015 11:18:00 AM
A very creative and lovely write! I enjoyed it very much! :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/23/2015 1:41:00 PM
Why thank you Chris. Appreciate you reading and commenting. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Date: 12/23/2015 8:45:00 AM
A lovely and creative take on this paradise theme, Susan. Rhyme is an added bonus! gl in the contest. ~ Regards // paul
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/23/2015 1:40:00 PM
Thanks Paul! Glad you liked it.
Date: 12/23/2015 7:47:00 AM
Sounds like paradise to me Susan and great rhyming too - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/23/2015 1:39:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan! Hugs...
Date: 12/23/2015 3:40:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Susan - Well done - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/23/2015 1:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise!

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