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Panacea - My Three Lovely Ladies

Tucked in the corner a nice spot to gaze waiting in anticipation to see each poetic face As each poet arrived a group came toward me three brilliant glowing spirits Bliss, Love and felicity We gazed and marveled as gracious words we exchanged a delightful slice of euphony as tranquility rang We sat for what seemed a lifetime in stories of each poets dream then before I knew each soul had flown away O how I miss the bliss of each loving memory and each precious sunbeam freely given by felicity If just one word could describe that dulcet eve. the word "Serendipity" would surely have to be For such a lovely eternal garden I had the pleasure to see while simply looking for a nice story, an evanescent dream..... __________________ Contest ~ "A Table Of Four" Rick Parise Carolyn Devonshire Andrea Dietrich Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" Barianna

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Date: 7/2/2011 11:28:00 AM
Dear Rick, I haven't been able to be on the Soup much lately but feel honored to share your table. Beautifully written entry! Congratulations on your win, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2011 1:57:00 AM
a heavenly moment, rick.... best cheers for your stunning win :) huggs!
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Date: 7/1/2011 6:43:00 PM
A super big congrats for this one, Rick. Love the sweet descriptive way you described the evening at our table!
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Date: 7/1/2011 6:38:00 PM
You would never be the same! lol..congrats on your win..I love this one. BG
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Date: 7/1/2011 5:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rick. Excellent piece. Nice going. Have a great Fourth. Ralph
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Date: 7/1/2011 3:49:00 PM
Congratulations Rick. It must have been a wonderful evenign. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "A Table of Four" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:37:00 AM
You have chosen a trio of lovely ladies to dine and share your table!! Congratulations on this wonderful winning poem!!
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your win in Michaels contest with this lovely poem. These are people I would like to meet also!
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:04:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Michael, Rick
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:04:00 AM
Congrats Rick!!!! you picked 3 amazing women....
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Date: 7/1/2011 6:55:00 AM
Congrats Rick on your excellent win in Michael['s contest with your fab four poets..wow so wonderful choices and thankxx for including the "Sweetheart" my friend..one day come true .. God willing..luv..
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Date: 7/1/2011 6:43:00 AM
congrats on this exceptional write. cory
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Date: 6/17/2011 1:54:00 PM
Wow, Rick, I am deeply honored to have mention here in this beautiful poem. Someone told me it was here, so I popped on over. What a sweet treat! Thanks so much for the mention. LInda and CArolyn are two very inspiring ladies and I 'd love to be sitting there with them and with you! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/17/2011 12:09:00 PM
You've chosen well, my friend. I wish for your dream to be realized. Your poetry says wow. Good luck in the contest. :-)
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Date: 6/16/2011 7:57:00 PM
poetry assignment# Form: 25 line Free verse ~~ Category: Slam, visionary, and sympathy ~~ Title: * Gorgeous and deadly * .. time is part of the grading as well. Also don't forget to use all 3 categories in your poem... thank you,..P.d.
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Date: 6/16/2011 5:48:00 PM
Great one that you have composed here..Excellent poetic qualities..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara
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