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Painful

Past experiences paint my soul with sorrow ! Praying for peace I write . . . poetry ~ pouring words pretending, I am fine_ pity ... my broken soul "prayers are powerful !" ________________ April 7, 2021 Poetry/Pleiades Verse/Painful Copyright Protected, ID 04-1344-609-07 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Pleiades P sponsor, Kim Merryman, Judged 04/12/2021 Second Place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2021 11:21:00 PM

Ahh!! Very emotive and expressive lines penned in this one. Congrats. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2021 10:56:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the compliment and congrats, love _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2021 2:57:00 AM

- Beautiful but sad, Constance - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 4/13/2021 8:45:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thanks for the compliment and congratulations, love _Constance

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/12/2021 1:38:00 PM

Beautifully written, Constance! You pour your heart into everything you write! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2021 2:02:00 PM

Kim, thank you for the inspiration and my placement, the compliment and congrats, appreciate, love _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2021 1:22:00 PM

You write about pain as beautifully as ever, even in this short form. Congrats, Dear Heart.

Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2021 2:03:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the compliment and congrats, love _Constance

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/9/2021 7:19:00 PM

Sorrows of the past do seem lacquered upon us so deeply...don’t they... but for the power of prayer we wouldn’t be able to breathe...Poetry IS like oxygen to the broken and suffocating! What a wonderful Pleiades you have written! Best hopes for the contest! Big huggs and love my friend! Deb

Constance La France
Date: 4/10/2021 9:33:00 AM

Deborah, thank you for the great comment, and compliment on my poem, love _Constance

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/8/2021 2:45:00 PM

Poetry can be so cathartic, this is so heartfelt and moving, we can all relate here~

Constance La France
Date: 4/9/2021 12:05:00 PM

Michelle, thank you for the comment and compliment, love _Constance

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/8/2021 7:39:00 AM

Heartfelt and poignant write, Constance, praying for your peace:)

Constance La France
Date: 4/8/2021 7:53:00 AM

Jo, thank you for the nice comment, appreciate, love _Constance

Joseph May

Date: 4/8/2021 6:50:00 AM

Beautifully done Constance.. best wishes

Constance La France
Date: 4/8/2021 7:53:00 AM

Joseph, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate, love _Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2021 9:07:00 PM

Great flowing and heartfelt verse, Constance. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 4/8/2021 6:20:00 AM

Eve, thank you for the compliment and the encouragement, love _Constance

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/7/2021 8:19:00 PM

WoW! BW, What a good entry for the contest. Nice job with the “ P”s. It was such a moving write to read. I agree; prayers are powerful. Best wishes in the contest- Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2021 8:27:00 PM

Alexis, thank you for the compliment on my Pleiades and for the encouragement, appreciate, love _Constance