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Paddy In the Smoke

An old man walks the cobbled streets Of a city he helped create When he had walked on younger feet Back so proud and straight The bog’s of Ireland he left behind To search for a better life In a foreign city’s numbing grind With mind erasing strife Loneliness ate his homesick heart And solace he did seek In bars where he became a part Of sad emigrants clique Far too swiftly his life took flight With only dreams of home Work filled days and drink filled nights But always so alone Cruel age stole the years and strength As quick as you could blink Work and home and hope soon went Only friend now left is drink So now he walks those cobbled streets Homeless broke and old While in his mind old ghosts he greets Clad in green and white and gold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/18/2016 12:31:00 PM
EAMON, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:38:00 PM
EAMON, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:56:00 PM
So true Eamon well described!
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Date: 1/5/2011 3:53:00 PM
Great writing here, Eamon. And a relevent topic for today's tragic world. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/5/2011 10:03:00 AM
At some point we all come to terms with or mortality, Eamon. Time passes quickly and with it goes our strength and sometimes our dreams. For me alcohol would only intensify the feelings of despair, but this is where many turn to numb the pain. A poignant and memorable poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/5/2011 6:50:00 AM
A sad write Eamon and you did it brilliantly with the images you incorporated.. Thank you for your comment on mine ~ ;-) WN
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:18:00 AM
I think this might be the best one you have ever written - it scans beautifully - Happy New Year Eamon - Liz
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Date: 1/5/2011 4:01:00 AM
A sad pathetic picture you have worded for the old man with work filled days and drink nights, Eamon.
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