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Overgrown Vines

Silence had consumed him, since the time she left for eternal peace and now she only visited him in his dreams. With headstone covered with moss and overgrown vines he couldn't believe that too many years passed in loneliness. Her carved name was hardly visible even in bright sunlight, but he recognized her final place of rest. Vines were in love with her too, he thought, they earnestly held her headstone with their tangled arms. He felt no fear, left her in their care, in sun and rain, as he knew they were there while she rested in peace. A twig from a vine, he used as pen and wrote on the headstone covered with green moss - 'remembering you on our fiftieth wedding anniversary'.
Sept 30, 2016. Overgrown With Vines - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Date: 10/9/2016 5:40:00 PM
Well written. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 10/9/2016 4:01:00 PM
Meenakshi, you have penned a very meaningful poem, beautiful and CONGRATULATIONS on yor win in my contest ~
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:33:00 AM
Very sweet Meenakshi. A beautiful in depth use of the theme using the vines in various ways. I could picture a sad but loving look on his face.
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:19:00 AM
great write Meenakshi, loved every line lovely lady congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/8/2016 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations Meenakshi, very well written...
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Date: 10/8/2016 2:54:00 PM
Hi Meenashi, What a sad and touching piece. I could sense a profound " loneliness in each line. Congratulations on your win. It was deserved: -) Alexis
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