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Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, 'neath the shade, near a stream, where cool waters flow, lived a man and his dog all alone with their dreams of bounty and beauty and bones so it seems. They lived off the land and the wonders of God, walking roads paved with promise only nature had trod, finding wealth and beauty every step of the way, knowing reason and purpose to kneel and to pray. Their place in this world is for them plain to see, in the shade by the stream it was certain to be. Could this love for each other be the bounty they know, found outside the city where the pomegranates grow? 'Neath the shade, near a stream, where cool waters flow, Outside the city where the pomegranates grow. A First Line Prompt Sponsored by Julia Ward 04/19/2016

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Date: 8/9/2017 10:36:00 AM
Excellent poem, Charlie. I love the refrain, it is very fetching ... er, pardon the pun. Beautiful poetry. Love and joy always.
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Date: 8/10/2017 2:52:00 PM
Thank you Freddie...
Date: 5/4/2016 3:17:00 AM
Great write:) Dogs are truly man's best friends:) Congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 5/4/2016 5:32:00 AM
Thank you Jo...
Date: 5/3/2016 12:36:00 PM
Beautifully penned Charlie...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 5/3/2016 3:21:00 PM
Thank you Joseph...
Date: 5/3/2016 11:00:00 AM
Such a lovely, heartwarming poem, Charlie. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. Sandra
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:18:00 AM
You're so kind Sandra, thank you...
Date: 5/3/2016 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest. Your poem is very appealing.
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Date: 5/4/2016 5:52:00 AM
You're welcome. :)
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Julia for your sponsorship and consideration, Charlie
Date: 4/24/2016 1:55:00 PM
You have done really well with this prompted line contest, Charlie. Yours is a beautiful poem and I would happily place it on the winning list! #7 ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/24/2016 5:40:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and wonderful encouragement Paul, I really appreciate it...
Date: 4/23/2016 12:16:00 PM
Beautiful poem my lovely friend read from you. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/23/2016 1:52:00 PM
Thank you so much BL. You are the lovely one...
Date: 4/23/2016 7:00:00 AM
Wow, Charlie! I love this one!
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Date: 4/23/2016 7:16:00 AM
I'm so glad you do Susan, thank you so much for the visit. Isn't this the real reason we do this; So others might read and appreciate our efforts and hope in some way to contribute to a collective good? Thank you again, Charlie...
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Date: 4/23/2016 7:15:00 AM
I'm so glad you do Susan, thank you so much for the visit. Isn't this the real reason we do this; So others might read and appreciate our efforts and hope in some way to contribute to a collective good? Thank you again, Charlie...
Date: 4/22/2016 12:30:00 AM
what a lovely way you did that sonnet, Charlie. Great flow, great feeling in the whole piece.
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Date: 4/22/2016 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, you've really given my limited skills a boost. I really appreciate your encouragement...
Date: 4/21/2016 9:10:00 PM
Charlie, I think this is absolutely wonderful for the line prompt, you did and excellent, 7 ~
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Date: 4/21/2016 9:24:00 PM
What great encouragement your words bring, Broken Wings. Thank you so much...
Date: 4/21/2016 2:12:00 PM
Excellent rhythm and flow with outstanding imagery - I enjoyed reading this piece! Good luck in the contest, Charlie!
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Date: 4/21/2016 2:19:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and well wishes Pandita, I look forward to reading more of your work...
Date: 4/19/2016 8:34:00 PM
As I read this, this man and his dog and their world became real for me! Nice Lyric Sir!
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Date: 4/19/2016 9:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Walter...
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Date: 4/19/2016 8:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Walter...
Date: 4/19/2016 8:02:00 PM
Very nice!
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Date: 4/19/2016 8:05:00 PM
Thank you Tom...
Date: 4/19/2016 4:17:00 PM
You've captured the love of man and his dog very well, Charlie. Soup mail coming your way.
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Date: 4/19/2016 5:19:00 PM
Thanks again Lin
Date: 4/19/2016 4:14:00 PM
beautifully handled, charlie... i like this!..huggs
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Date: 4/19/2016 5:18:00 PM
Thank you so much Nette...

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