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Out of This World: Let the Martians Speak.

01545 Message Urgent. Jet Propulsion Laboratory, California TOP SECRET. Eyes Only Basis. Analysis and Follow Through ASAP. Play Tape... "Coming in ..clear on the screen.. It's all black, No, Wait! It's green!" They all start to shout. " We've got one! No Doubt!" " Hold that picture! Oh, God! Eeeee..NNnnnnnn... " Your intrusions we surely will foil." Your devices that you send to toil with one silver arm, can cause us no harm, as we wait beneath cold, rusty soil. End Of Transmission.

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Date: 3/23/2010 4:59:00 AM
Good one! Congratulations Gerrard, on your win in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 8:39:00 AM
Well done, they waiting Huh? Congrats
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Date: 3/21/2010 3:18:00 PM
Gerard, I just want you to know how glad I am that you are a member of Poetry Soup. We all come here for our own reasons, but I feel priviledged to be able to read your work. You have quite a flair for humor and I think of you as a friend. Love and admiration, Carolyn
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Date: 3/21/2010 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your place Gerard. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/19/2010 7:36:00 PM
Congrats Gerard on your winning poem and placement in the Limerick contest.. a great win and write.. enjoy your special moment in the spotlight and I am happy to be sharing it with u ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/19/2010 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine limerick and your win. Joyce
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations Gerard on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest, awesome Limerick >> James
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:36:00 AM
I enjoyed this format very much, Gerard! Clever approach. Congrats on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/17/2010 10:59:00 PM
Very nice and interesting write in Limerick format. Enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/14/2010 1:18:00 PM
This was fun to read. Thanks for a smile today. Keep writing with your inventive charm....Aloha, Connie
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Date: 3/14/2010 11:13:00 AM
Hey Gerard, Thanks for reading and leaving those kind comment on my piece...appreciate you encouragement...I've asked Audrey to post these comments on my behalf....Jimmy
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:45:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your words, today, Gerard. Good luck in the contest. And thank you for sharing with us. And thank you for your recent comments on my work. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:27:00 PM
Excellent Limerick Gerard and good luck in the new contest.. very creative and super verses too.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Gerard for your kind comments and encouragement! Appreciate all help!!! Jeralynn
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Date: 3/12/2010 10:29:00 AM
Cool sci fi, Gerard, you have geat imagination. Good luck in the contest, man!!
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Date: 3/11/2010 5:47:00 PM
Welcome to the Sci Fi channel !! How funny is this??!! !!! (I can even hear the static!)
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Date: 3/11/2010 2:25:00 PM
Uniquely written and entertaining! This is really cute! Jeralynn
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