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One With the Sky Spirits

I relinquish all emotions, all sadness that could fill oceans; in a great leaping, twirling prance, I abandon myself to dance. Spinning- I surrender my grief, that came to me a deathly thief; whirling breathless in a wild trance, I abandon MYSELF to dance. Reckless and wanton I leap high, I leave forsaken and just fly; empty of tears- spirits I glance, I abandon myself to d a n c e . All the spirits are watching me, I see the them- the he and she; pray give this Indian girl a chance, I abandon myself to dance. ________________________ July 2, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/One With The Spirits In The Sky Copyright Protected, ID 07-1082-298-02 All Rights Reserved, 2018, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, November 2018 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 11/2018 First Place

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Date: 11/12/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Vlad for visiting with comment and congratulations, appreciate so much ~
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Date: 11/12/2018 2:47:00 PM
Hi Constance, dropping by with my congratulations on your win with this much deserved write. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/12/2018 8:09:00 AM
Alycia, thank you for visiting with comment and congrats ~
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Date: 11/10/2018 2:13:00 PM
Very up lifting! Congrats!!
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Date: 11/6/2018 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Frederic, Kishan, and John for visiting my poem and for the great comments, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/4/2018 11:03:00 AM
This poem lifts my spirits, Constance, thank you for sharing. John
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Date: 11/3/2018 6:50:00 PM
Beautiful write dear
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Date: 11/3/2018 6:14:00 PM
there is a deep spirituality to this poem, one I really appreciate...
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Date: 11/3/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Chris, James, and Kim for visiting my poem and commenting, so appreciated ~
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Date: 11/3/2018 7:52:00 AM
I can picture this, Constance! Such a lovely abandonment!
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Date: 11/2/2018 7:44:00 PM
Liberating, filled with honor, well done, Dear Heart
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Date: 11/2/2018 5:12:00 PM
I really enjoyed the flow of this one. It sang to me as I read it today. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest
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