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One Last Chance

One last chance Verse 1 Sitting here alone, I'm wondering about you... cos, lately there's a distance between me and you... Is our love worth saving, or is our time long overdue? Chorus we've got one last chance, my love, one last chance... Do you care enough to save our love? If we just try-one more time, maybe our love won't die, or, have you just had enough? Oh no! Verse 2 So long we've been together, our love should be strong... At first it felt so right, but, does it now feel wrong? I know the love I'm feeling, but do you still feel it too? Chorus we've got one last chance, my love, one last chance... Do you care enough to save our love? If we just try-one more time, maybe our love won't die, or, have you just had enough? Oh no! Verse 3 Growing old together, seems the thing to do... but, does a love get older, and get tired too? Do you want a break, or, can we start fresh and new? Chorus we've got one last chance, my love, one last chance... Do you care enough to save our love? If we just try-one more time, maybe our love won't die, or, have you just had enough? repeat chorus and fade John Derek Hamilton September 08,2019

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Date: 9/9/2019 10:11:00 AM
Beautiful John holds a sense of melancholy to it! And I find melancholy to be the most beautiful of all writes! ;)
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/9/2019 10:27:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, I agree Elton said it best, sad songs say so much, actually it was Bernie Taupin's words but Elton sang it! Somehow, melancholy writes are my fave genre as well!
Date: 9/9/2019 10:10:00 AM
sometimes it's worth saving, sometimes not, both have to want it...this is poignant John, the lyrics make for a great song...some of the best songs in my opinion are the sad ones... this lingers on, great penning :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/9/2019 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Sandy, I appreciate your insights and support. You're right I think Elton would agree with you, sad songs say so much, my fave genre as well!
Date: 9/9/2019 8:50:00 AM
One last chance for romance...you got it in you my friend...great lyric Johnny Boy...^WW^ :o)
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/9/2019 9:52:00 AM
Hey WW nice to see you pass my way, thanks for the kind comment and support!
Date: 9/8/2019 5:09:00 PM
Great one John. I can feel that 'one last chance'. ...:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/8/2019 10:40:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I know it's a simple tune but glad you liked it!
Date: 9/8/2019 2:54:00 PM
Sometimes love is not enough my friend... enjoyed your lyrics..
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Silent One
Date: 9/9/2019 1:14:00 AM
Yes and I have a contest on it
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/8/2019 10:40:00 PM
Wasn't that a song, I think Patty Smythe and Don Henley?
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/8/2019 3:01:00 PM
Thanks for the kind visit SO, you do make my day better!

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