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Once Bitten -

It must have been quite the fright everything in your vision out of sight how to cut the meat would you miss your seat ouch!!! my thumb I have taken a bite

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/5/2016 5:30:00 PM

I've never been able to write limericks. They are a much stricter form then people realize. Excellent job bro!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/4/2016 10:08:00 PM

Ive been bitten more than once! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/4/2016 2:45:00 AM

I enjoyed your funny limerick Tim. ; )

Skat A

Date: 9/3/2016 9:49:00 PM

By the way, nice Bio. LolololL --- in another world. (may I ask you for a favor?) COULD YOU recommend the best poets of poetry soup. Skat-Lite

Skat A

Date: 9/3/2016 9:46:00 PM

Thank you so much for paying my first poem a visit. You're kind sir. The welcome was wonderful. I am glad to be a part of this healthy site (lol.) If ever I need your assistance, I will look you up before any other amateur poet. I hope to grow in my poetic journey. I heard this site has more than words to say. Never a dull or silent moment. In regards to your Cowboys Remark. I'm a Texan Full Blown Fan. Don't get dim with me cuz, I'm From Texas. Not everyone likes the Cowgirls. LoL Skat-Lite

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/3/2016 5:48:00 AM

Ha ha ha ! ... Meaty might ! ...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/2/2016 6:16:00 PM

You got a giggle from me - ouchy indeed ... CayCay

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/2/2016 5:32:00 PM

You are down with the limericks, Tim.:) Funny!