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~~ past the creaking gate and down the long road I weep at your cold stone grave but love is eternal I remember you brought me red roses red roses that fade in time but love is forever "and not a day will pass that I do think of you, my one true love" _________________________________ February 14, 2015 Kimo x2 plus 1 line For the contest, I Think Of You, sponsor, gautami phookan 7th place

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Date: 3/17/2015 9:20:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..I know that it must be hard when one loses their mate as that is the person who should be the closest to us even more close than mother, father, sister or brother..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/4/2015 11:09:00 AM
BW.. a belated but well deserved congrats on your moving piece I'm traveling and just now read your creative work!
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Date: 2/22/2015 6:04:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/22/2015 3:03:00 PM
Broken, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, enjoy the coming week **SKAT**
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Date: 2/16/2015 2:01:00 AM
that is a good take on the contest I hope you win. very awesome write even though it is immensely saddening.
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Date: 2/15/2015 1:53:00 PM
Sad, yet beautiful Constance xx
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Date: 2/14/2015 10:18:00 PM
You show your soul's pain to us again. So few beautifully crafted words that bleed the sorrow and love intertwined in your heart. I feel your anguish and am so sad for you. love Shane xxx
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Date: 2/14/2015 2:49:00 PM
Sad, touching, but beautiful! Great double Kimo, Constance. Well done!! All the best. // paul
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:36:00 PM
This sad write brings old memories to me. Definitely adding this great poem to my fav list! Thanks.. A7
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Date: 2/14/2015 1:00:00 PM
so sad and yes beautiful as well.
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Date: 2/14/2015 11:43:00 AM
Such beautiful sorrow in your words . Lovely and sad . Love this write ! Bev
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Date: 2/14/2015 11:38:00 AM
a touching imagery put in a beautiful way... a 7 ...fav poet... have a great weekend.. lov,nad
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Date: 2/14/2015 10:59:00 AM
I think you were very wise to use this in a contest called "I think of you." It is the most expressive way you have of remembering this true love. Such a tragic story, Constance. I notice you use this image in many poems, the same way i recall a wonderful night of my youth in my poems over and over again! These are the things that stay with us forever.
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Date: 2/14/2015 10:02:00 AM
beautiful sad imagery - hope this does well for you in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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