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On the Way To the Dentist

I have to get to my dentist right away. This tooth is aching me like hell today. Without a doubt, he will have to pull it out. A bad tooth is something that can't stay. Inspired by another member's poem

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Date: 1/17/2014 11:33:00 PM
Oh yes. The good old dentist.I know the pain of an aching tooth. Nicely done Robert. Thanks for your kind comment.
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Date: 11/30/2013 2:10:00 AM
Ouch! Ill have to wait outside..I get the heebie-jeebies at the dentist. BG
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Date: 11/30/2013 1:20:00 AM
good one. Robert. There are not too many things as bad as painful teeth!!
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Date: 11/29/2013 10:48:00 PM
This is awesome, I just had to read this one because I have a bad tooth or two and it is killing me, I look forward to seeing the dentist! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous Limerick! What a beautiful poem about pain and suffering due to a bad tooth! Great Work!!
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