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On the Line.

I put my heart on the line, But you hung up.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/30/2010 12:51:00 PM

So much said in just two lines, Amanda. Quite a profound statement you have made in this poem. I will remember your words here because we all put our hearts on the line at times and letting someone know they "hung up" might make them think twice before hurting another. Love, Carolyn

Brian Anderson

Date: 11/17/2009 1:13:00 PM

clever. i really liked this

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2009 6:10:00 AM

Sorry. I am sure that another who will be true will come on the phone. Keep writing. Sara

Steve Malebranche

Date: 9/18/2009 11:27:00 PM

Short, but makes so much sense....i love it...