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On the Edge of a Dream

Like miles stretching far beyond the willow's soft sway the distance nearing turning wheels and heartbeats fast when at last, again, endless........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/9/2013 8:52:00 AM
This is a very powerful tanka. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/9/2013 1:57:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your winning spot Rick xx
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Date: 1/8/2013 6:16:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/7/2013 5:59:00 PM
Rick this was such a heavenly one. Dreamy as the title implies. Congrats on your big second place win in my contest.
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Date: 12/30/2012 8:25:00 PM
I heard you're a tough judge and cookie Mr. Rick. I would love 2 join your contest. first join my hello kitty. then we'll talk. lol. i can not imagine you with a hello kitty poem. i dare you. luv~skat
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Date: 12/30/2012 1:21:00 PM
Amazing poetry from you Rick.Happy New Year to you and yours.
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Date: 12/24/2012 11:22:00 AM
Spectacular write here my friend, I love this poem! What a delightful piece, Great Work!! Merry Christmas!
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