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A continuation of Rick's 8 Line Poem...
Forever in my thoughts nightly in my dream a vision in my heart her smile a glowing moonbeam In melodious windchimes her angelic laughter rings Forever will our mirthful times fly on memories' wings * * * * * Rick's 8 lines For loving memory she must depart forever lovely forever apart My lilac of beauty white satin dream in solitude and rain drops forever it seems : . . . . . . . . . . . . . : November 5, 2017 8 Line Poem Contest Sponsor: Rick Parise

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Date: 11/21/2017 4:13:00 AM
Lin, your poem is beautifully written and blends well with Rick's.
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Date: 11/12/2017 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations Lin...
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Date: 11/11/2017 6:37:00 AM
Lovely imagery and flow, Lin. Congrats on your high-placed win. Regards, John.
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Date: 11/11/2017 1:43:00 AM
I love the rhyme in this eight line poem congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/10/2017 7:00:00 PM
Beautiful write, Lin - just gorgeous! Congrats on your win, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 11/10/2017 5:54:00 PM
Congrats!!! Lin...beautiful piece my friend...best wishes...^WW^
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Date: 11/10/2017 5:38:00 PM
Congrats on your lovely write Lin!
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Date: 11/7/2017 5:48:00 AM
Wonderfully written, Lin. I love the melodious windchimes line!
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Date: 11/7/2017 6:11:00 AM
Thanks very much, Dan. It's great to see you again. I appreciate that you detailed something you particularly like.
Date: 11/6/2017 6:10:00 AM
Beautiful lines, Lin:) thank you for your visit to my poem...and the hug:)
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Date: 11/7/2017 6:10:00 AM
It's always a pleasure to read you, Jo. Thanks very much for liking this one.
Date: 11/5/2017 7:18:00 PM
Beautiful flow, and a lovely poem.
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Date: 11/5/2017 7:20:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/5/2017 11:52:00 AM
what a touching way to continue Rick's poem, I especially love the imagery in your second stanza:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/5/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Jan. Your comments are always so encouraging. I liked his 8 lines so when he offered for them to be used as inspiration, I took him up on it.

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