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On Golden Sand

Sit with me as sunset silently slips into the sea, and when he's closed weary eyes, linger with me. Frothy waves will chase us as they race to shore. Together, we'll laugh at the mighty ocean's roar, then gaze at starry skies while you hold my hand. Let's share our dreams on a beach of golden sand. June 17, 2022 Bite Size Poem No.47 Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 3:00:00 PM

Lovely brevity, Jenna ~

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 6/26/2022 9:24:00 AM

Beautiful! "Sit with me as sunset silently slips into the sea"....gorgeous! Congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/26/2022 10:22:00 AM

Thanks for the line and kind comments, Paulette.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/24/2022 3:52:00 AM

So very romantic, Jenna. Congratulations on your win.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/24/2022 7:22:00 AM

Thanks for your thoughts, Subimal.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/24/2022 3:16:00 AM

Romantic and so lovely Jenna. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Blessings xxoo

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/24/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Connie.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/23/2022 8:43:00 PM

Great imagination beautifully expressed. Congratulations!

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/24/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thanks so much, Chris.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/23/2022 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Lovely" write. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/24/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thank for the kind comments, Paula.

John Gondolf

Date: 6/23/2022 5:56:00 AM

The ocean at sunset can create such a romantic mood. This is so beautifully written, Jenna, congrats on your win. John

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/24/2022 7:20:00 AM

It certainly can, John. Thank you for liking this one.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 6/18/2022 10:43:00 AM

A lovely poem. It is so nice to be at the beach.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/18/2022 4:30:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jeanette.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/18/2022 9:46:00 AM

Good one, Jenna. I loved the alliteration in the first line especially. And, of course, I love sea and beach images. Oozing with romance. Write on! Good luck in the contest.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/18/2022 4:29:00 PM

Thanks for the many complimentary remarks, Milt.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/18/2022 4:49:00 AM

Life’s a beach where the soft and mighty meets, even better at nighttime, a very romantic and picturesque write indeed Jenna, a poet’s poem, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/18/2022 5:53:00 AM

"A poet's poem..." That sounds awesome. Thanks so much, David.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/18/2022 3:19:00 AM

Outstandingly romantic , dearest Jenna. Much enjoyed its beautiful imagery! Blessings.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/18/2022 5:53:00 AM

Thank you very much for your thoughts, Demetrios.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/18/2022 2:09:00 AM

Oozing romance! “linger with me” ~ good luck for the contest, Jenna

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/18/2022 2:43:00 AM

Thank you very much, Seeker. I'm grateful for your read and remarks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/17/2022 11:32:00 PM

A very romantic verse Jenna, you captured it well in a bite sized verse. Best of luck and have a lovely weekend. Tom After a scorching few days here, rain has decided to show its face, on the bright side can't paint my garden gate lol.

Jenna Logan
Date: 6/18/2022 2:42:00 AM

Thank you on both counts, Tom. I've sent you an email about your garden gate. lol