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On a Passing Cloud There Floats a Dream

Some days are misery, and all is grey. We search the sky and do not see one beam of light from sun to take the gloom away, yet on a passing cloud there floats a dream. Hope never fails; we must keep going on. Yes, shadows of some sleepless nights can seem to linger dreadfully before the dawn, yet on a passing cloud there floats a dream. It’s good to wish upon the night’s first star which you can spot as it begins to gleam. Both stars and clouds seem far from where we are, yet on a passing cloud there floats a dream. Reach up and snatch your bright desire from sky, for dreams and wishes from the heavens stream. Hard rains may come, and you may heave a sigh, yet on a passing cloud there floats a dream. Sept 14, 2018 for Joseph May's One In Five Ii Poetry Contest (phrase #3: On a Passing Cloud There Floats a Dream)

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Date: 11/10/2018 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/10/2018 2:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/10/2018 1:17:00 PM
Hi Andrea, congratulations on your win with this much deserved write. have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/6/2018 4:50:00 PM
Great imagery, Andrea!! Congratulations on your win!! Regards, John.
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Date: 11/5/2018 2:26:00 PM
I knew this would be a winner Andrea. Congrats on your first placement in Brian's contest! I loved this beauty! : )
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Date: 9/20/2018 4:27:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win. You caught hope beautifully on the passing cloud.
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Date: 9/19/2018 7:29:00 PM
There is hope on that passing cloud..Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 9/17/2018 9:31:00 AM
Very uplifting poem, Andrea, best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 9/14/2018 11:02:00 PM
Oh this is definately going to be a winner Andrea. Smooth as glass with visual delights! : )
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Date: 9/14/2018 8:32:00 PM
This is simply very pretty, a lilting write with perfect refrain. Clouds and dreams are simply lovely to contemplate.
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Date: 9/14/2018 12:31:00 PM
Nicely done, Andrea, good luck in the contest. Thank you for your loving condolence. Hugs eve
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Date: 9/14/2018 11:29:00 AM
Your poem has such a subtle niceness and consistency. Good luck Andrea.
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Date: 9/14/2018 10:55:00 AM
Nice poem - it reminds me of a song by the British ra rock band "King Crimson" - "That which passes passes like clouds". Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/14/2018 10:52:00 AM
The inspiring beauty of hopes and dreams are serenely expressed in your superb poem, Andrea. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/14/2018 10:10:00 AM
A message of hope in your verse Andrea, well written. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 9/14/2018 9:47:00 AM
There is a calm ease to this poem that fits the topic so splendidly. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/14/2018 9:30:00 AM
This was beautiful and enchanting Andrea. Yes indeed, on a passing cloud there floats a dream. Really nice.
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