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On a Black Day - Death Survives - Series 2

Are you strong, young man? Can you help me keep this Farm going? Do you fear hard work? Calluses on your fingers and hands “tough Love” You will be a great man, you follow my directions , People watch You growing You can have “ A Real Life “ something to Love; Love from GOD Above Dad I appreciate Your taking me in; giving me, shelter through a Stormy Life Yes I accept , the rules of Your House; I will be diligent in my chores The day starts at 3:45 AM , milk the cows; out to pasture before 5 O’clock Muck out the stable, feed the chickens, Slop the hogs, breakfast at six Your tutor will be here from nine ‘til noon; Have a shower, he’ll be here soon I( walk to the house, and what do I see; Brenda’s Eyes, Red like fire, a serene Blue I hear the Pain : “She Screams” I feel the Violations She had to Endure Brenda, What’s wrong, I have seen pains of fear, pains of life, pains of Death Your face shows all, from the mountain top, to the deep Waterfalls Depths You are my Older Sister; “I’m concerned : Is that blood on Your Dress?? To be Cont.

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Date: 3/6/2012 12:04:00 AM
pulling the reader in with good unfolding of the plot, liege... some sense of hidden suspense here...this can evolve into a short story... looking forward to the next " chapter".. :) huggs!
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