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Ole man winter rolled up his white bed Donned his wool coat and covered his head Dragging spring upon his gown Happy folks no longer frown Not March was said winter's face turned red Ole man Winter turned swiftly around Threw his white bed all over the ground Spring's sun melted it to slush Warm air came in a fast rush Winter exhausted did a quick rebound

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/22/2019 1:28:00 PM

Very impressive personification, Sara! That ole man is no match for a young one like spring! Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 2/21/2019 11:51:00 AM

ha ha, love picturing this : )

Jan Allison

Date: 2/20/2019 3:12:00 AM

what charming personification Sara, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/20/2019 1:12:00 PM

Jan, Thanks for the uplifting review of my work and for the congrats. Sara

Charles Messina

Date: 2/19/2019 8:16:00 PM

Coming back with congratulations, Sara. Than you for yours to me too! Great Job! Wishing you good health...Charlie

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/20/2019 1:12:00 PM

Charles, Thanks for dropping by again. I appreciate you being here. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2019 4:34:00 PM

I love your personification of "Ole Man Winter," Sara. You described well those days when winter mounts a "rebound" as the feel of spring is delayed. There were some wonderful entries in this category. Congratulations on your second-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/21/2019 6:26:00 AM

Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats. I appreciate the honor of placing in your contest. Sara

Charles Messina

Date: 2/19/2019 6:19:00 AM

Sounds like you live in New Jersey, you've described the winter here perfectly. Nice write Sara. Spring is nearing woohoo!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/19/2019 4:25:00 PM

Charles, I have seen how the New England states are having a terrible time with one snow storm after another. Here in the south we have not had snow this year but it will warm up some then another cold and rainy spell will come through. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2019 8:15:00 PM

another cute poem! Loved seeing this and the hopeful picture of spring.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2019 7:39:00 AM

Andrea, There is hope that spring has sprung. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/17/2019 6:53:00 PM

What a gorgeous limerick; it made me smile and feel optimistic. March is coming.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/18/2019 7:39:00 AM

Caren, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara