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Oh, That Rule

Since I was a little girl I have been writing poems and stories, My grandma encouraged me to write my sadness in a journal; And I did and then I wrote stories about my cat and mom's flowers, I would start writing with no plan, the words would come tumbling. As I got older, I learned about forms and rhyming and rules, And of course the requirement for syllables in certain poems; I can handle the rhyming rule, but that syllable thing is so restrictive, See, I am a rambler, I like it when my words just fall from my pen. My writing is an avalanche of emotions, sometimes very sad, And I want no borders, no walls to hold me back, restrain me; So I wrote you this verse, oh yes, for I could use lots of wordy words, Oh that syllable rule was begging to be broken, and so this girl did. _________________________________ July 22, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Oh, That Rule Copyright Protected, ID 16-810-901-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, That Rule Was Begging To Be Broken sponsor, Lewis Raynes First Place

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Date: 8/16/2016 8:18:00 AM
Hi BW. I enjoyed the way you narrated about how you slowly learned to convert emotions into words..... Congrats for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/13/2016 2:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win, you syllable count breaker, funny you impose strict syllable counts in your last contest, should I break them? Hmmmm...lol
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Date: 8/13/2016 10:23:00 AM
:D I agree with you. To let emotion free rules have to be broken. Well done and congrats on your 1st place win. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/13/2016 1:37:00 AM
Twelve comments to go. I gotta keep my eyelids open!!
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Date: 8/13/2016 1:36:00 AM
Way to go, you made it be about writing, and you did a great job of it, Constance. BIG congrats to you. I love how you draw on your own experiences.
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Date: 8/12/2016 2:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win Constance
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Date: 8/12/2016 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations for the glory of breaking the rules..
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Date: 8/12/2016 9:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win! #1
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Date: 8/12/2016 8:50:00 AM
Congrats to break the rule and win top Place in Contest. Hugs
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Date: 8/12/2016 8:46:00 AM
This is so simple and so amazing Broken,many congrats!
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Date: 8/12/2016 3:36:00 AM
Many congrats on your win Constance:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/11/2016 10:18:00 PM
Love your take on the theme in this contest, Broken Wings! Nicely done, and congratulations on your First Place win! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/23/2016 10:19:00 AM
you really found a GREAT way to do this challenge. i have a silly poem that talks about me breaking a traffic rule Good grief!!! This should do well in the contest.
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Date: 7/23/2016 1:16:00 AM
So true :) that's y I avoid this syllable count contests..nice thought:)..sure win
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Date: 7/22/2016 6:34:00 PM
I especially love the final stanza Constance it so wonderful to let your pen be free with no restrictions - yipeeee:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2016 6:13:00 PM
I love the ending Constance...good luck
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