Oh Tableau

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Ava's first birthday She thinks to herself Why are they Smiling What are they singing What happened to me Is this what love is So captivated Her look is precious Painted on her face Icing from the cake Toothless and hairless She stares- mesmerized Tableau 6- lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May 3/17/2021

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/18/2021 6:01:00 AM

Love this. So cute. God bless you with a win. Love, your friend, Gina

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/17/2021 8:00:00 PM

Charles, There's magic in the toothless and hairless wonders this world shows us. Nice poem to find this Saint Patrick's day. -Richard