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Oh, in my mind, in my mind_ there are mountains cliffs for me to stand tall and forest trails from memories that I have twined: And from my soul a song, a bird call . . . Oh, hushed a snowflake floats to enthrall, and I, in my mind twirl in pure white snowfall! _______________________ November 13, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/Oh, In My Mind Copyright Protected, ID 11-1501-990-13 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bite Size Poem, No.55 sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 11/28/2022 Honorable Mention

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Date: 11/29/2022 9:02:00 AM
Your poem evokes a most evocative and sensitive look into how we find beauty. Its longing penetrates the heart!
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Date: 11/29/2022 1:02:00 PM
Lonna, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment, blessings
Date: 11/29/2022 4:42:00 AM
" I, in my mind twirl in pure white snowfall" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/29/2022 5:36:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 11/28/2022 2:51:00 PM
I love the imagery here Constance. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 11/29/2022 5:36:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings
Date: 11/28/2022 1:04:00 PM
Lovely poem, Constance ~
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Date: 11/29/2022 5:37:00 AM
Line, thank you so much for the inspiration, contest, and my Honorable Mention, and the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 11/13/2022 5:30:00 AM
Constance, your beautiful words conjure a magical whim of romance as I read along! What a lovely poem!! Happy Sunday !
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Date: 11/13/2022 6:19:00 AM
Mike, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, appreciate, happy Sunday to you also!

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