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Impermeable waters thrill the air To invigorate tiptoes everywhere, Dizzy where moist grasses and blooms unfurl As herons pirouette through a curved swirl, Where mist, in full hydration, reels a while Its tangy perfume …the senses beguile! As crystallization forms like soft ice From mild gushes, flowing tendrils baptize The requisite weave of crests, its tidal intent Where islet’s limbs end a water dance’s fest Oh, precipitation of gust crowns the moon Tugging lovers and dreams in a ballad’s tune. ................... 4/16/2016 Elements Part 3: Water Contest of Brian Davey ~Hydration, Requisite, Precipitation, Impermeable, Invigorate, Crystallization~

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Date: 4/27/2016 11:59:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/23/2016 8:17:00 AM
OH NETTE. This is really lovely. WOW!!! The content, the lines, remind me that rhyme can be will done, can not sound forced and be filled with uncommon word pairings and imagery so thick that they rhyme seems coincidental instead of intentional. Stunning. Soup etiquette says, don't say should have placed higher. LOL. You know me... I'm not so good with etiquette. First, in my books. xoxoxo your absent Sis.
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 4/23/2016 3:23:00 PM
First tied. Nette, did you read Charlotte's entry? Stunning, as well. Free verse you would relish, as much as I did. Hugs.
Date: 4/17/2016 10:25:00 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write nette..
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Date: 4/17/2016 5:52:00 PM
BIG congrats to you, sweet friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/17/2016 11:44:00 AM
Nette, beautiful...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 4/17/2016 8:00:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/17/2016 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations Nette on your placement in my Water Element contest! You used the 6 words exceptionally well in this write! Thank you for entering
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Date: 4/16/2016 3:00:00 AM
You certainly beguile with this lustrous, exhilarating poem!
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Date: 4/15/2016 3:33:00 PM
Such majesty that the even a seemingly water-lover like you can create when sailing across her is deep and rich through this extraordinary poem. Congratulations on your recent medals!
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Date: 4/15/2016 3:27:00 PM
- What a glorious poem, in image, words and delicious perfume, Nette :) - Good luck in contest - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/15/2016 2:04:00 PM
You wove the words in so beautifully Nette:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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