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Oh, DEATH, you have visited my beloved and I have HATED your final grasp. I have stood silently at a bedside holding a hand, waiting for death, Are you an angel, I was asked, yes I whisper, and then the final breath. In dreams, dear departed drift, dip, disturbing dust of distant doors. _______________________ December 17, 2015 Anagram, Couplet, Alliteration For the contest, 4 lines, sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 12/22/2015 2:05:00 AM
Brilliant take Constance n a great win.. big congrats! Deeply touched!
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/22/2015 2:10:00 AM
Upma thanks for the brilliant and the congrats ~
Date: 12/21/2015 7:39:00 AM
Sad and touching...but beautiful!! Congratulations on a most deserved win, Constance! *** All the best....paul
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/21/2015 12:25:00 PM
Paul, I love the word beautiful and thanks for the congratulations
Date: 12/21/2015 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations! The words are feelings are so sad. The writing is very creative.
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/21/2015 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Susan for the nice comment and the congratulations
Date: 12/21/2015 7:01:00 AM
Excellent win Constance!! Congratulations!
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/21/2015 12:27:00 PM
Michael oh I love the word excellent and thanks for the congratulations
Date: 12/20/2015 9:45:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest Constance. Beautifully poignant write.
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/21/2015 1:53:00 AM
John, thanks for the congrat and the lovely comment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/20/2015 8:29:00 PM
As usual, BW, sad, but so beautiful and deep. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/21/2015 1:54:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for the congratulations and hugs and the comment, yes that's me sad and deep ~
Date: 12/20/2015 7:27:00 PM
wow, this is good, Constance. Glad to finally see it and congrats for the win.
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/21/2015 1:55:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the congrats, yes, I rather like it too !!!
Date: 12/20/2015 6:03:00 PM
Your poems I hold dear to my heart! May God heal you in every manner possible! Congrats and Merry X'mas to you and your sister!
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/21/2015 1:56:00 AM
Balveen, thank you for the congrats and nice comment, well if you hold my poems to your heart, you are holding sadness there, and seasons greetings to you, dear heart ~
Date: 12/20/2015 4:46:00 PM
broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/21/2015 1:57:00 AM
Linda, thanks for visiting and for the congratulations, I love that word wonderful ~
Date: 12/20/2015 11:25:00 AM
BROKEN, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/20/2015 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Skat
Date: 12/19/2015 9:12:00 PM
What a spectacular write loved this!
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/19/2015 11:47:00 PM
Arthur, oh I love that word spectacular, thank you
Date: 12/17/2015 6:22:00 PM
Cleverly done in keeping with some definite restrictions. I love your 'd' alliterations in your final line. Well done! Keith
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/17/2015 6:50:00 PM
Keith, thank you so much for visiting my poetry and for the nice comment and the compliment, appreciate ~
Date: 12/17/2015 1:46:00 PM
Oh my dear, this is so sad and heart breaking poem it touched my soul ...elegant and beautiful write as usual....hugs / / :D dalia
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/17/2015 6:50:00 PM
Dalia, thanks so much for visiting, and for the elegant and beautiful, two beautiful words, and for the hug ~
Date: 12/17/2015 1:02:00 PM
*Love* this Broken Wings..good luck in the contest you will do great!
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Dear Heart
Date: 12/17/2015 6:51:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the love and the support, appreciate ~