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Of Youth

On the mountain looking down from the highest peak, my old love and I held hands. No words did we speak. Murmur of a stream was the serenade we heard - youth’s sweet tranquil dream. June 25, 2021 For the Seguidilla Poetry Contest of William Kekaula

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David Smith

Date: 7/1/2021 3:00:00 AM

You always deliver sweet surprises for us. Like the bow around this one David in NZ

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/27/2021 10:42:00 PM

So pretty "Murmur of a stream was the serenade we heard -"

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/27/2021 8:27:00 PM

I like this, a beautiful heartfelt write with feeling.

Bryan Norton

Date: 6/26/2021 4:29:00 PM

This is a sweet poem, Andrea. You always make the best of what is handed to you. Good job. Take care.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/26/2021 3:01:00 AM

You write of love so beautifully, Andrea:)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/26/2021 2:34:00 AM

Such a romantic write... I enjoyed reading it... Reads like a winner, Andrea...

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/25/2021 9:43:00 PM

Hello Andrea … where better could you be to revive passion - thank you Andrea - Lindsay

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/25/2021 12:46:00 PM

Words not needed when holding hands of love. Oh, the youth! Well done, Andrea.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/25/2021 11:26:00 AM

I love this. It's gorgeous. God bless you dear friend. Love to you, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/25/2021 11:24:00 AM

- A beautiful and valuable memory, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/25/2021 11:16:00 AM

A romantic beauty. Hand in hand with first love, enjoying the moment. I can never write romantic poems. You Excell in all poetic forms.

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/25/2021 10:11:00 AM

Ah, the fleeting innocence of youth. Well written as usual Andrea. If only life was that simple and pure.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/25/2021 9:52:00 AM

This is very lovely and romantic, Andrea. Janice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/25/2021 9:31:00 AM

Melodious sounds accompany a romantic stance. Excellent.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/25/2021 9:21:00 AM

Sweet memories of our youth Andrea , we never forget. Good luck and enjoy your weekend. Tom

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/25/2021 9:07:00 AM

Ah! Those wonderful, youthful memories you bring back. Beautiful write! Pure poetry! At my age I would need a tornado to get me to the top of the mountain:)