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Sour Grapes

When thoughts like lightning streak across my mind In brilliant flashes of the clearest hues  If turning them to words on page I find My efforts and advances are refused I oft will turn my ire towards the page Until the subject on which words won't form Dies crumpled in a ball of poet's rage With judgement as capricious as a storm. Yet in the calm that comes when storms have passed As daylight drys the anger from my eyes I see the mound of paper there amassed. With clarity -- of sorts -- I realize The vision that I first thought so sublime Was never worthy of such skill as mine. 8.16.18 Contest:Sour Grapes Syllable count checked on howmanysyllables.com (Although it is incorrectly counting "poet's" as 1 syllable)

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Date: 9/14/2018 7:58:00 PM
Good one, Jesse. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 9/13/2018 7:54:00 PM
Nice job Jesse, you are quickly establishing yourself as a top writer here on the soup!! Well done and congrats on another winner!
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/13/2018 10:19:00 PM
Wow, that is a very kind assessment. Thank you very much.
Date: 9/12/2018 4:13:00 PM
Your sour grapes is aimed at yourself admirably, as the next morning reason sets in. A wonderful entry with an important lesson bravo and congratulations on being in the top three Jesse. Excellent work! : )
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/12/2018 5:01:00 PM
Yes, sadly this is based on actual events. Thank you for the comment.
Date: 9/12/2018 3:25:00 PM
Love where you took the 'sour grapes' theme, Jesse! Well done, and congratulations on your podium win! Sandra :)
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/12/2018 5:00:00 PM
Thank you so much. I figured this would be a unique direction.
Date: 9/12/2018 1:08:00 AM
Congratulations, Jesse on your fine win.
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/12/2018 5:00:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 9/11/2018 10:04:00 PM
Love it, Jesse--especially the couplet! CONGRATS! Janice
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 9/12/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 8/22/2018 12:52:00 PM
This is a great sonnet Jesse! I especially liked the rhyme "passed and ammassed". That stanza really jumps out, as the "turn" should. Really enjoyable to read. Regards, Dean
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Jesse Rowe
Date: 8/22/2018 2:22:00 PM
Many thanks. I think it's every poet's hope that their writing is enjoyed.

Book: Shattered Sighs