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October Sky - Haiku

scarecrow’s pale shadow moves across the brittle corn… harvest moon rising <<**>> autumn’s fiery dawn gently stirs a caldroned lake… mallards flying south <<**>> frigid cobalt blue starkly frames a weathered nest… leafless maple tree non traditional haiku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/2/2015 12:05:00 AM
David, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2015 4:59:00 AM
Wonderful string of haikus David! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/25/2015 4:05:00 PM
I prefer your non traditional to many of these I have seen. Though almost all the October sky haiku have been very good, I think your set is one of the best.
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Date: 8/24/2015 4:13:00 PM
Poetically and visually lovely ~ I can already see this one on the winners' list! All the best. // paul
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Date: 8/23/2015 4:18:00 PM
absolutely delightful imagery David I have finally finished mine today:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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