October

A chill in the air Thick clouds hover Intense hues Of maple leaves Splashes of reds Under a distant sun Peeking in and out Sprinkles of gold And bursts of glitter Speak to my soul In joyful clusters AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on November 12, 2019

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Sandra Adams

Date: 11/14/2019 6:40:00 AM

Beautiful fall image :) nice penning :) hugs

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2019 9:58:00 AM

Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/14/2019 12:06:00 AM

You have described our days last week before the snow and the ice arrived.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/14/2019 12:21:00 AM

We had not seen the sun for a week till today. Better start turning on the S.A.D. lamp.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/13/2019 7:00:00 PM

Your words paint such a lovely scene of a very enjoyable October day!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2019 7:49:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Evelyn.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2019 6:34:00 PM

really beautiful, Line. it's such a pleasure to see these scenes.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2019 7:49:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/13/2019 4:29:00 PM

I like the way that the warmth of your inner glow took the chill right out of this one! So nice! Best of everything, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2019 5:02:00 PM

Aren't you sweet... You sound like you have a guilty conscience over less charming comments you've left me before. LOL

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/13/2019 4:21:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and feeling in this piece.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2019 5:02:00 PM

Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.

Francisco J Vera

Date: 11/13/2019 3:31:00 PM

October can be cold or warm depends on where you live. Halloween is time where give kids candy or take kids trick or treating. So live life and have a great party for halloween.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2019 3:45:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Francisco.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/13/2019 9:48:00 AM

I love October, my birth month and Fall gives me likewise joy!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2019 12:41:00 PM

That's wonderful, Kim. So it should. Happy belated birthday!

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/13/2019 8:50:00 AM

Another time of life has come and gone...All written in October leaves...Nice one

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2019 8:56:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Arturo.

Chris Green

Date: 11/13/2019 8:39:00 AM

Beautifully crafted my friend. The leaves don't change colors down here except from green to brown so I rely on all of the wonderful poems around here to show me these scenes and yours was fantastic.

Chris Green
Date: 11/13/2019 9:31:00 AM

I guess it couldn't hurt to try on a pair. : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2019 8:57:00 AM

Do you need rose colored glasses then Chris?

Ann Foster

Date: 11/12/2019 10:23:00 PM

Splashes of reds... my fav.. great write. Ann

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/12/2019 11:03:00 PM

Thanks, Ann. Much appreciated.