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How grand it is when blue sky meets the sea, may sky and sand and water ever be, reflected in this topsy-turvy lea. Oh, let the stars fall down, and over we. Will you meet me where the foam froths and roils, where waves pound upon glistening soil, and seagull's squawk in mismatched harmony; oh, let the stars fall down, and over we. Sea tossed, the dross shines upon the strand. Gemstones are born, where the sky meets the land. meet me down by the rush of lulling sea; oh, let the stars fall down, and over we. Here we will lie for all eternity, with life and death, and our love of the sea. Scenic Point by Robert Butler

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Date: 10/6/2011 6:39:00 PM
So touchy and romantic,Debbie.Congratulations on your well deserved win...You are the best....
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Date: 10/6/2011 4:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Great job. luv Ralph
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Date: 10/5/2011 4:35:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on a brilliant win with this exquisite entry and dynamic delightful poetry luv..
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Date: 10/5/2011 4:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely sonnet and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/5/2011 3:52:00 PM
A magnificent sonnet, Deb, and I love the repeating line. You create quite a romantic mood here and you know I love to watch the sky meet the sea. Beautiful! Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/5/2011 2:49:00 PM
Good to read this Debbie and great to see your win today..
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Date: 10/5/2011 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "October-Your Choice" contest . Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:56:00 AM
Let's plan to meet at this spot where the gulls are crying and the sea meets the sky. An awesome sonnet, Deb. This one heads to my favorites. Congratulations on your success in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2011 2:15:00 AM
this deserves more than an HM, debs... still, huggs to you for your splendid piece and win! :)
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Date: 7/1/2011 8:34:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your HM with this lovely imagery filled entry luv.. beautiful poetic art ..luv..enjoy special honor..
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Date: 7/1/2011 7:11:00 PM
Deb, this is actually a lot like a kyrielle for the repeating end lines! Your meter has come so far since I first met you. I love the lyrical flow of this beauty. I think it is better than an HM. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/1/2011 5:47:00 PM
A lovely sonnet Debbie. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:20:00 PM
lovely sonnet Debbie, congrats on your HM in the contest
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Date: 6/21/2011 1:36:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your fantastic win with this very beautiful and enchanting write. love, gautami
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Date: 6/7/2011 10:30:00 AM
How could one not love this beautiful poem.....? The rush of the ocean waves fill my ear. Love it!!
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Date: 6/7/2011 5:18:00 AM
this is going on my fav list. congrats
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/7/2011 7:30:00 AM
How kind Russ, the ocean and sky are endlessly inspiring!
Date: 6/6/2011 10:16:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your first place win with this exciting entry ..wow..wow..oh..
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/6/2011 1:59:00 PM
Thank you Linda it just goes to show one often writes better from their own personal inspiration.
Date: 6/1/2011 10:17:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Debbie. I've revised 'flint' and written another tanka, 'bridge' - could you have a look sometime and tell me if it's correct please? Thanks : )
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Date: 5/27/2011 4:19:00 AM
Beautifully penned with wonderful imagery.I really enjoyed reading it! huggs
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Date: 5/26/2011 4:35:00 PM
Every line is magnificent but last one is sums up a beautiful poem. Anne
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Date: 5/25/2011 7:12:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Debbie! A very inspirational piece. Love the imagery and the thoughts that accompany them. Wishing you and yours, the best! Mikki
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:58:00 PM
Deb,your meter has improved drastically since I met you over a year ago. I think your studying of new forms has really paid off for you. soupmail.
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:01:00 PM
this was awesome I love thinking about the sky and ocean. have a great night cory
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Date: 5/24/2011 1:49:00 PM
Thats very nice~written superb~A 10 in my book. Marked as one of my favs. Good day...^Rck
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