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Ocean Sunrise

Night's darkness fading away. The dawn alive with light. Tempting us with a beautiful day. Sunrise, promises such delight. The sun chose colors to paint the sky. Gold and orange filtered through the mist. Not a cloud was was seen passing by. The first bit of daylight, wakes us with a kiss. The sky, now a brighter orange and red, fills the horizon with such vivid hue. As if there was a raging fire instead, of nature's own good morning view. Above the sea, the sun casts a sparkling hello. The waves dance and curl in the morning light. Prisms of color appear pink, red, and yellow. Sunrise upon the ocean, a magnificent sight.

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Date: 1/19/2019 10:58:00 PM
Colorful and very creative , nicely done.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/20/2019 12:07:00 AM
Thank you, Eve I appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 1/19/2019 3:24:00 PM
radiant piece filled with sun's color chart... nice, nice, sandy...huggs
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/19/2019 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, nette I am glad you could feel/see the color. Thank you for reading my poems, I appreciate it so much.
Date: 1/19/2019 3:24:00 PM
Most beautiful. This part took my breath away: "The sky took on colors that the sun decided upon. Gold, orange, and red filtered through the mist. This day had begun, the last of night, was gone. The first daylight, was waking us with a kiss."
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/19/2019 3:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Caren. I am happy that that part touched you. That is what it is all about. Thank you for your lovely comment.
Date: 1/19/2019 2:04:00 PM
Absolutely beautifully written Sandy. I also like the line...the sky took on colors that the sun decided upon. Well done :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 1/19/2019 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi I needed to hear about that line, wasn't sure it worked. It does, YAY! Always appreciated.

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