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Ocean Dance

. She held my tiny fingers And we jumped each salty wave Dancing with an angel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/14/2008 4:23:00 AM
Carrie - What a wonderful Haiku - So vivid are the images - Blessed poetry and may God Bless the poetess
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Date: 8/14/2008 3:33:00 AM
OH! what a beautiful, clear image that I have been blessed enough to act out many a time...so beautiful! Awesome, love Kristin
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Date: 8/13/2008 6:33:00 PM
Carrie great imagery I see it now it reminds of my daughter and I at the beach when she was young! Thanks Laura :)
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