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Sea's soulful song Serenades silky shore, Silent stranger Strokes silver sand, Soothing sadness Seducing sleep.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/23/2020 2:08:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/23/2020 2:37:00 PM

:-)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2020 6:39:00 AM

A masterful piece, congrats on your win. ;0)

Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/23/2020 7:42:00 AM

Thank you.

Joseph May

Date: 12/23/2020 4:52:00 AM

Very nicely done Joanna, Congrats on your win..

Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/23/2020 5:41:00 AM

Thank you. :-)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/23/2020 4:10:00 AM

Congratulations, Joanna, on your placement for creating this great lullaby!!

Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/23/2020 5:41:00 AM

Thank you. :-)

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/22/2020 10:03:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/23/2020 1:35:00 AM

Thank you. :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 12/22/2020 7:59:00 PM

Joanna, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve

Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/23/2020 1:35:00 AM

Thank you. :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2020 3:43:00 PM

I did lullaby too, but with L's. I love how EVER single word you used was with S. Very clever!

Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/23/2020 1:35:00 AM

Thank you. Good minds think alike. :-)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/20/2020 11:51:00 AM

A soft poem full of beautiful ssss's, nicely written dear poet. Thank you for sharing.

Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/20/2020 12:11:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, and for your comment. Have a lovely Christmas.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/15/2020 2:14:00 PM

I can hear the waves lapping on the shore in your words, Joanna! Lovely, soothing alliteration. "S" is a great choice for your theme. Best wishes for the contest!

Joanna Feltham
Date: 12/15/2020 11:48:00 PM

Thank you. :-)