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Record player needles, Stamps you have to lick; Watches that you have to wind So they can start to tick… Cameras that require film, Phone books, huge and thick; Doctors who make house calls When you’re home and feeling sick… Ribbons for a typewriter, Milk with Nestles’ Quick; Brylcreem, where a little dab Will make your hair look slick… All are gone or heading there And it’s hard to pick What we think will disappear Or what, perhaps, will stick. Life evolves so rapidly And changes happen quick; Predicting obsolescence Is a true magician’s trick.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/13/2012 11:04:00 AM
very clever piece! a trick for sure, tho I hope they keep Nestles Quick - I do so enjoy my chocolate milk- syrup just isn't the same. wonderful musings :)
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Date: 6/11/2012 8:53:00 AM
Oh I love looking back accompanied by your flowing pen. I found some Black Jack gum yesterday. Still on the trail of sen sen. love Kathy
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Date: 6/10/2012 6:48:00 PM
'...predicting obsolescence,' 2 words, 7 syllables, PERFECT rhythm! Your pieces are so enjoyable and entertaining. It is ALWAYS a pleasure to visit your pages! Best wishes, Keith :)
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Date: 6/9/2012 7:33:00 PM
Enjoyed this nostalgic poem, Ilene. Well done. Love, Kim
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Date: 6/9/2012 4:02:00 PM
ilene, I must be very old fashioned, as I wind my watch every day hmm....David
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Date: 6/9/2012 1:19:00 PM
Nice poem... Hopefully, humanity doesn't become obsoplete... Terry
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Date: 6/9/2012 12:42:00 PM
Ilene, I love this poem..All so true, makes you think....Tanya
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Date: 6/9/2012 11:03:00 AM
I remember my dads Brylcreem.....lol....do not smell good....Well written Ilene. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/9/2012 9:59:00 AM
a great clever write my friend. .smile for this interesting poetry =) *jun-jun*
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