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Obsession

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Below is the poem entitled Obsession which was written by poet Valerie Staton. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Obsession

Obsession

A letter to my secret love
The moment I first saw you
Was the most perfect day
A day I will forever cherish
The best day of my life
A day I will remember always

Some say love does not last always
I say what they had was not love
Real love transforms your life
Real love is what I want with you
 Moments to cherish
My love, Forever and a day

I saw you yesterday
Looking good as always
Every moment in your presence I cherish.
I decided to write, my love
And express my feelings to you
I did not want, to wait another day

Tell me you want me in your life
You want to marry me one day
You want me to be with you
Our union will last always
I will be your one true love
Our life together you will cherish

You, my love, I cherish
For you I’d lay down my life
There is no greater love
I declare to the world today
I am yours always
Oh darling, I love you

The way I feel about you
Is a feeling I will forever cherish,
A feeling I want to experience always
The greatest day in my life
My love, will be that glorious day
You reciprocate my love 

I want you in my life always
I love and cherish you
Tell me today you love me too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 5/13/2015 8:13:00 PM
Beautiful and bold! You express yourself well! I hope he reciprocated the sentiment. :-) Kim
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Date: 12/27/2014 6:21:00 PM
excellent romantic write- many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:45:00 AM
VALARIE, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Sorry, it took this long to post the winning poems. Stop by my latest blog "A Woman's Gift" if you'd like. Enjoy life and the Holidays. :) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/1/2014 7:21:00 AM
This is lovely, I love it, well done :)
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Date: 9/7/2014 4:29:00 PM
Great love song ya got here Valarie!
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Date: 9/4/2014 2:30:00 PM
Love it - excellent romantic write! Welcome to PoetrySoup. Kika
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Date: 9/4/2014 12:15:00 PM
Valerie,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/4/2014 7:50:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Valerie - I choose your first lovely written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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